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a drink, my drink
o' let me sink
I can't write tonight
'cause words don't blink
perfect in purple
and a lime of green
a drink, o' drink
satiate my thirst, now so keen
a barrage of doubts
creep in my den
maggots and roaches
grab hold of my pen
I lay down in the basket
truth seems so insane
dusts trap me in its web
and tears start to rain
I taste of memories and prison alike
hunted by the wolves, and thunder-strike
I know not my name, shit, am ashamed
racing away to nowhere, on once faithful bike
peace and sorrow
hand in hand
is this my destiny
but, wait, am yet to land
a drink, my drink
o let me sink
I ain't talking tonight
'cause words never think
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Loved the words... The flow... and the feel...
ReplyDeleteTasty drink I would say!
Thanks Satya :-)
DeleteLet us drink together!!
ReplyDeleteloved the lines!!
Sure ... cheers :-)
DeleteSuch a wonderful composition, Emerald and that too in a unique way!
ReplyDeleteThanks Simmi :-)
Deletewrite - about everything! even doubts :)
ReplyDeleteI try :-)
DeleteHope your words return (although your words above speak loudly) - let's drink to it!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Sure ... let's drink :-)
DeleteSo sweet ...
ReplyDeleteThanks Cat :-)
DeleteI love this and the metaphors sprinkled throughout. Hope your 2014 is going very well thus far Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-) Hope you too are having a great year :-)
DeleteNow i can say it with pride that YOU can write about almost anything and that too in wonderful manner :)
ReplyDeleteCHEERS!
That means a lot to me buddy ... thank u :-)
DeleteSimply wonderful, Amrit. I drink with you!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
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