(Image Source: http://magpietales.blogspot.in/2014/01/mag-203_19.html)
You carve the music as I paint the rain
Together, my friend, we will endure the pain.
My canvas strumming your pattern, music in your soul
Nodding in acknowledgment, our dreams, our whole.
We crave for loneliness, solitude is delight
'cause nobody pays a dime for our worthy plight.
In tears and smiles, we are two best friends
Look how this rain showers blessings, the love it sends.
We celebrate our failure, embrace our pride
Life isn't just about winning, but also braving the tide.
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A relationship can shape its own special joy. Love the first line. A great opening.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma :-)
DeleteLife is about braving the tide. so well written. loved your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteSo many good lines in this, well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pea :-)
DeleteThis is absolutely magnificent. And I love the closing - very powerful Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThat is a very very optimistic post. ;Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
Delete'Life isn't just about winning, but also braving the tide.' How true. It's about doing what you love whether anyone else appreciates it or not. Nice Mag!
ReplyDeleteAh! A poem about living life and relationship with others--rain...or shine!
ReplyDeleteThanks Steve :-)
DeleteAh... I loved it... isn't it too musical... i felt such :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Super-poetess :-)
DeleteI like how the rhyming musicality in this pen complements the image ~
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteThis one is brilliant Mr. Sinha :)
ReplyDeleteLove each of your line...
ReplyDeletecute and deep :)
Thanks Simi :-)
DeleteI just loved the tone of this promise, braving the tide... Wonderful as always Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteThis was so beautiful and so so brave. Every line made its point.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! :)