"no temple to prayare the Gods not listening" - Just sums it all up!!Well thought out Haiku!!
Thanks Nanka :-)
Both well done but really relate to the first one!
Thank You Maggie :-)
Ah... emotional neglect is worse than physical abuse. Beautifully done!
Tragic and thoughtful with layers of meaning x I love it x
Thank You :-)
GS beautiful, after reading up definitions for Pariah I so see how it led you to this.
Thanks Rambly :-)
Heartfelt description of many in society who are left out and isolated. Sad!
Thank You WabiSabi :-)
Very apt description and soul touching and the line son God not listening really strikes a chord there.beautifully penned.
Nice words...Strong words..
Thank You Satya :-)
Mr. Speck, you're a master of haikus.
Thanks Kiara :-)
I'm amazed by how well you write Haikus.Always well-written. :)
Thanks for those kind words :-)
How wonderfully put the life of a pariah, an outcast in an attention-capturing way!
Thanks Pranita :-)
Those souls not accepted in regular spiritual places - I wonder who really has the right to deem them outcasts! Thoughtful haiku!
Thank You Gemma :-)
Beautiful
Thanks Ali :-)
Well done. Those within the temple make the rules, but I wonder if God listens to them :)
That's what they are left wondering as well !!!
To lie in ruined scars is misery indeed!Haiku Pariah
Very true !!!
"... are the Gods not listeningcries of sorry fate"Too often one feels that way. What's surprising is how many things we can associate this misery to.
I agree with you Vaishali !!!
Ah to be a pariah...it would be a difficult existence.
Tough life indeed !!!
The gods are listening, Green Speck. :-) Wonderful haikuk
Thanks Celestine :-)
Well expressed. I do hope the gods are listening as well!
Let's keep our fingers crossed :D
breath-taking! the despair is threaded through each word.
Thanks Paige :-)
poignant and powerful.
Thank You kz :-)
Isn't it scary ? You'd touch something too deep, you always do...:)
Thanks Sadia :-)
So sad and for me very easy to relate to, very well done =)
I didn't mean to use my google account, its been compromised somehow because my name isn't even Amber
I hope you get back your account soon :-)
Very well done, and actually speaks to many.
Thanks McGuffy :-)
sorry fate indeed!
I agree Sara :-(
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"no temple to pray
ReplyDeleteare the Gods not listening" - Just sums it all up!!
Well thought out Haiku!!
Thanks Nanka :-)
DeleteBoth well done but really relate to the first one!
ReplyDeleteThank You Maggie :-)
DeleteAh... emotional neglect is worse than physical abuse. Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteTragic and thoughtful with layers of meaning x I love it x
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteGS beautiful, after reading up definitions for Pariah I so see how it led you to this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rambly :-)
DeleteHeartfelt description of many in society who are left out and isolated. Sad!
ReplyDeleteThank You WabiSabi :-)
DeleteVery apt description and soul touching and the line son God not listening really strikes a chord there.
ReplyDeletebeautifully penned.
Nice words...
ReplyDeleteStrong words..
Thank You Satya :-)
DeleteMr. Speck, you're a master of haikus.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kiara :-)
DeleteI'm amazed by how well you write Haikus.
ReplyDeleteAlways well-written. :)
Thanks for those kind words :-)
DeleteHow wonderfully put the life of a pariah, an outcast in an attention-capturing way!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pranita :-)
DeleteThose souls not accepted in regular spiritual places - I wonder who really has the right to deem them outcasts! Thoughtful haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank You Gemma :-)
DeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks Ali :-)
DeleteWell done. Those within the temple make the rules, but I wonder if God listens to them :)
ReplyDeleteThat's what they are left wondering as well !!!
DeleteTo lie in ruined scars is misery indeed!
ReplyDeleteHaiku Pariah
Very true !!!
Delete"... are the Gods not listening
ReplyDeletecries of sorry fate"
Too often one feels that way. What's surprising is how many things we can associate this misery to.
I agree with you Vaishali !!!
DeleteAh to be a pariah...it would be a difficult existence.
ReplyDeleteTough life indeed !!!
DeleteThe gods are listening, Green Speck. :-) Wonderful haikuk
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteWell expressed. I do hope the gods are listening as well!
ReplyDeleteLet's keep our fingers crossed :D
Deletebreath-taking! the despair is threaded through each word.
ReplyDeleteThanks Paige :-)
Deletepoignant and powerful.
ReplyDeleteThank You kz :-)
DeleteIsn't it scary ?
ReplyDeleteYou'd touch something too deep, you always do...:)
Thanks Sadia :-)
DeleteSo sad and for me very easy to relate to, very well done =)
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteI didn't mean to use my google account, its been compromised somehow because my name isn't even Amber
ReplyDeleteI hope you get back your account soon :-)
DeleteVery well done, and actually speaks to many.
ReplyDeleteThanks McGuffy :-)
Deletesorry fate indeed!
ReplyDeleteI agree Sara :-(
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