Thursday, April 11, 2013

Koi Pond

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painted jewels float
on serene canvas of waves
nature's rippling joy



This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Koi Pond.





48 comments:

  1. nature's rippling joy.. wonderful haiku! :)
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    If you'd like to read mine, here it is: http://wp.me/p1QKRs-WP

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  2. Thanks a lot Amrit Sinha.. You made my day...I am so happy to be here.. lovely haiku as usual...good work..

    RS

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  3. Such beautiful fish and a beautiful way of capturing it...great work as always my friend.

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  4. Each line is a jewel. Well done!

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  5. Beautiful Haiku.
    Loved the lines - ' serene canvas of waves'

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  6. Nice word painting.

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  7. an artist indeed of the Haiku - this was stunning GS!

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  8. I love the move from introductory descriptive to metaphorical music! Lovely!

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  9. Very nice take on the prompt..love it
    Peace
    Siggi

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    1. That would be my preference too :-)

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  11. Your words delighted me, Green Speck! From painted jewels to rippling joy!

    Fascination

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  12. Surely very serene canvas of waves. Mesmerizing haiku.

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  13. Beautiful...comparison with painted jewel is beautiful.

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  14. Painted jewels float! - Very imaginative! :)

    Thanks a lot for ur gracious comment on my blog. I'm honored when u say my blog helped u understand haiku. But i'm still in the process of learning... so i guess we are learning from each other!

    Ur doing a beautiful job at it. Readin ur work is a pleasur. Cheers! :)

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  15. Rippling joy what a great phrase... the set is flawless man!

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  16. Painting indeed!! From a canvas to the 3D effect with rippling joy!! Beautifully done!!

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  17. Well expressed; beautifully worded.

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  18. nature is unpredictable in so many ways :)

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  19. an artist you are ;)

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    1. Thank You Audra ... have learnt a lot from you :-)

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  20. "painted jewels", I like those words. A beautiful haiku that paints the picture perfectly,,,

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  21. Koi as `painted jewels'- so lovely.

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