Nice take on the prompt. Well written. :)
Thanks Ajay :-)
That last line, that is so sad ~
Thank You Grace :-)
So true. If only we'd catch on!
We still have time :-)
stark reality. Nicely written amrit!
Thanks Maliny :-)
Sad...but, that's reality!
Hmm :-(
Sadly the lush green grass gives a miss!! Though a lot of activity goes on there on the desert sands!!
Yeah, and we hardly get to know about them :-)
I like your concept. Very realistic
Thanks Momina :-)
Nice Haiku for Grasshopper Green
Thank You :-)
I like this Haiku. There is truth in it.You are very creative. :)
like we say in hindi- kaafi gurdha matlab hai...very deep. loved the take.ektakhetan.blogspot.in
Thank You Ekta :-)
Yes a lot of truth in this my friend...
Thanks Keith :-)
Nice and brilliant take on the prompt
Great message here!
The sands of time,phew!Here’s my Day Eight
last line nailed it all..
Thanks Jyoti :-)
I love your take on this prompt. Beautiful image. I wondered if grasshoppers were international. Regardless, your thinking differently is a joy for me.
Thank You Maggie :-)
Haiku for social change. Well done, GS. Alice
I like the way you played with the word grasshopper. And your words are a chilling unfortunate truth. Well done.
Thank You Archna :-)
Nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteWell written. :)
Thanks Ajay :-)
DeleteThat last line, that is so sad ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
DeleteSo true. If only we'd catch on!
ReplyDeleteWe still have time :-)
Deletestark reality. Nicely written amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks Maliny :-)
DeleteSad...but, that's reality!
ReplyDeleteHmm :-(
DeleteSadly the lush green grass gives a miss!! Though a lot of activity goes on there on the desert sands!!
ReplyDeleteYeah, and we hardly get to know about them :-)
DeleteI like your concept. Very realistic
ReplyDeleteThanks Momina :-)
DeleteNice Haiku for Grasshopper Green
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteI like this Haiku. There is truth in it.
ReplyDeleteYou are very creative. :)
like we say in hindi- kaafi gurdha matlab hai...very deep. loved the take.
ReplyDeleteektakhetan.blogspot.in
Thank You Ekta :-)
DeleteYes a lot of truth in this my friend...
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteNice and brilliant take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteGreat message here!
ReplyDeleteThe sands of time,phew!
ReplyDeleteHere’s my Day Eight
last line nailed it all..
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyoti :-)
DeleteI love your take on this prompt. Beautiful image. I wondered if grasshoppers were international. Regardless, your thinking differently is a joy for me.
ReplyDeleteThank You Maggie :-)
DeleteHaiku for social change. Well done, GS. Alice
ReplyDeleteI like the way you played with the word grasshopper. And your words are a chilling unfortunate truth. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank You Archna :-)
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