Sunday, August 31, 2014

I Burn In This Flame

your sultry pink smile
knocks off my senses, always
I burn in this flame


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - Sense.



14 comments:

  1. "Then what's the hold up ... burn, baby, burn" ... sorry, but feeling a bit feisty today, Mr. G ... Love, cat.

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  2. That was beautiful...pink smile...unusual..liked it a lot

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  3. I burn in this flame... so passionate. Love it.

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  4. Did you get inspired from Pink Lips song ? Heheh. I mean why can't ?

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  5. you "change your ways" now
    or devil will claim your ass
    flames shall devour you...

    (Like ^.^ I've been feisty all morning!)--grin!

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  6. it happens , right ?
    (wonderful passionate haiku , Amrit ! )

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