Thursday, August 02, 2012

Talent - Haiku

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Weave castles in sand,
Dreams shaped in myriad grains,
Shining bright with hope.

Waves run with passion,
Destruction and creation,
Talent stays, survives.

Embracing challenge,
New found zeal and energy,
He begins again.

Castle stands erect,
Symbolizes his talent,
Eyes brimming with pride.


This Haiku is written for Sensational Haiku Wednesday and the Prompt is Talent.





40 comments:

  1. While reading this haiku I felt that it's a recollection of your blogging journey, of how you left and then returned with so much zeal.
    What amazes me is that you make time for writing each and every day. That is plausible and shows how much you love writing.

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    1. May be you are right ... I noticed that my blogging journey too is on the same line ... I write daily 'cause I love to write, and I want to grow and improve my writing ... thanks for being so supportive :-)

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  2. Beautiful story here! We all should begin...never stop...Lovely haiku!

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  3. Lovely....saw it all while reading.....enjoyed.....

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  4. magical talent here ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Excellent writing. We should never lose hope :) Cheers!

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  6. Hope is what keeps most of us going, faith, hope and love!! Three of God's most precious blessings! Beautiful haiku!! As always!

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  7. Very nice, I love these. Well done!

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  8. Waves run with passion,
    Destruction and creation

    How true this is, of both the waves of human invention and the waves of the sea. Bravo!

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  9. Lovely - eternal talent. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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  10. Really enjoyed the contrasts of the waves and sand. Love how you wove them all together. Wonderful!!

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  11. great series of Haiku
    perfect for summer

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  12. wish i was that talented! awesome words accompanying that sand castle!

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  13. Great Haiku...you are really talented!

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  14. There was a nice flow to the poem, Amrit. I esp. liked the following stanza:

    "Waves run with passion,
    Destruction and creation,
    Talent stays, survives."

    I believe, this was the crux of the message you had to convey. Brilliant! :)

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  15. It takes a lot of talent to erect one of those and your great talent to describe it..

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