oh my dear Time
will you accompany me
when I meet her
oh my dear Time
will you be patient and mild
when we are lost in love
oh my dear Time
will you rest for longer moments
to delay the goodbyes
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Time.
It is very poignant how you implore Time in this piece. Nicely expressed.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
DeleteHeartfelt plea. Very emotional
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
Deletetime is all we need.. and that's the one thing we can't have
ReplyDeleteneither more nor less !!
Very true :-)
Deletever well expressed. Time flies when we want it to move slowly.
ReplyDeleteTime is unpredictable :-)
DeleteVery nice sentiments!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteTime should accept the pledge of a lover :) very nicely expressed !
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteIf this could be true, I would be the queen of the world. Haha.. JK.
ReplyDeleteBut, yeah, queen of My world for sure.
Beautifully written.
Thanks Dhara :-)
Delete...don't worry...your time will :)) Delightful set..:))
ReplyDeleteThanks ma'am :-)
DeleteBeautiful set I love the 2nd one especially
ReplyDeleteNice write,,enjoyable...
ReplyDeletehttp://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html
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Thank You Sir :-)
DeleteTime will surely heed such poetic requests:) beautifully composed Amrit:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteI hope time listens...beautiful haiku
ReplyDeleteThank You Susie :-)
DeleteRomantic. Time shall hear you. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vaishali :-)
Deleteoh my dear amrit
ReplyDeletei think that you are in love
enjoy the moment:)
I am always in love my friend ;-)
DeleteIf only time could be managed so that it would linger over lovely things and hurry over the not so good bits! I loved your haiku x
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteLoved the last 2 lines most- do the delay the good-byes!
ReplyDeleteNice Haiku but I wonder if you followed 5-7-5 pattern?
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Thanks Ekta. I did follow 5-7-5 earlier, but not anymore, as that feels more like a restriction.
DeleteOh my Amrit. I totally feel in love with your Haiku this time. Each of them is so welll crafted. Time, wish it waits for us to experience and slowly witness all those wonderful moments :) loved it again :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot buddy :-)
DeleteThe dilemma of lovers so very eloquently expressed :-)
ReplyDeleteLOve and time are not really the best of friends. They share a very confusing bond according to me in fact. Found you at haiku heights. Will come back to read more such inspiring words for sure :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sarah :-)
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