Oh Amrit!! This reminds me of when my kids break or lose a crayon and then I have to replace it with a new one! What a wonderful set of haiku!
A white sun can shove itself in being neutral. Wonderful cascades Amrit!Hank
Thanks Hank :-)
White sun in a blue sky is a fabulous picture. The children are very inventive and make do with whatever they have and the results are amazing.
Thank You Joseph :-)
Oh, what an interesting set of haiku! I love it --- the sun as seeker. :D
Thanks a lot :-)
What a bright haiku...i would keep the sun white..it is so clear..but then the joy of colouring a sun with a yellow crayon can't be beaten either!
We all love colouring it that way :-)
i think i like the second once the most...such a strong turn in it....the losing of the crayon...and yet the sun still rises on a new day
Thanks Brian :-)
Your poem made me think of the sun of winter when it is so hard for it to glow and find its way among the overpowering gray clouds. Very evocative words!
Thank You Gabriella :-)
Beautiful. Nice that the sun rises again. Often, we must use our yellow crayon to color it in.
Thanks Myrna :-)
Very evocative....,very good writing.
Thank You Mary :-)
Very nice Amrit ... I had to adjust to this set before I quit understood it ... but than I saw "the light"... great haiku set. Chapeau!
Thank You Kristjaan :-)
Like the reference to the child's drawing. There is a world is those drawings ....Clever !
Thansk Rallentanda :-)
Nicely done!
Thanks Celestine :-)
amazing sun imagery.
Thank You Mimi :-)
Very nice
Oh Amrit!! This reminds me of when my kids break or lose a crayon and then I have to replace it with a new one! What a wonderful set of haiku!
ReplyDeleteA white sun can shove itself in being neutral. Wonderful cascades Amrit!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteWhite sun in a blue sky is a fabulous picture. The children are very inventive and make do with whatever they have and the results are amazing.
ReplyDeleteThank You Joseph :-)
DeleteOh, what an interesting set of haiku! I love it --- the sun as seeker. :D
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteWhat a bright haiku...i would keep the sun white..it is so clear..but then the joy of colouring a sun with a yellow crayon can't be beaten either!
ReplyDeleteWe all love colouring it that way :-)
Deletei think i like the second once the most...such a strong turn in it....the losing of the crayon...
ReplyDeleteand yet the sun still rises on a new day
Thanks Brian :-)
DeleteYour poem made me think of the sun of winter when it is so hard for it to glow and find its way among the overpowering gray clouds. Very evocative words!
ReplyDeleteThank You Gabriella :-)
DeleteBeautiful. Nice that the sun rises again. Often, we must use our yellow crayon to color it in.
ReplyDeleteThanks Myrna :-)
DeleteVery evocative....,very good writing.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteVery nice Amrit ... I had to adjust to this set before I quit understood it ... but than I saw "the light"... great haiku set. Chapeau!
ReplyDeleteThank You Kristjaan :-)
DeleteLike the reference to the child's drawing. There is a world is those drawings ....Clever !
ReplyDeleteThansk Rallentanda :-)
DeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
Deleteamazing sun imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mimi :-)
DeleteVery nice
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