I think there are a lot of words that are unspoken but not unheard. I think the better someone knows someone else the more likely this is to happen. That kind of silence speaks loudly!
Beautifully expressed :) For the last line, I thought going with the flow, it'd be love-struck me; then re-read to see that it's you-struck me :) Lovely to fly free on the wings!
Last two lines - Awesome !!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna :-)
DeleteI like the idea of the silence dispersing. Never thought of it from that angle. Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteThank You Peggy :-)
DeleteLet the silence fly free ~ I like that play of words in the ending ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
Deletewow! 'that lay unspoken but not unheard' i <3 these lines! what a perfect imagination Amrit! u r awesome :D
ReplyDeleteThank You Ankita :-)
DeleteI think there are a lot of words that are unspoken but not unheard. I think the better someone knows someone else the more likely this is to happen. That kind of silence speaks loudly!
ReplyDeleteI agree Mary :-)
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem! Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Balqis :-)
Deletenicely done.....
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
DeleteBeautiful lines !
ReplyDeleteThanks Umamaheswari :-)
Delete"a you-stuck me" Very sweet - I've never heard that phrase before.
ReplyDeleteI coined it myself :-)
DeleteBeautifully expressed :)
ReplyDeleteFor the last line, I thought going with the flow, it'd be love-struck me; then re-read to see that it's you-struck me :)
Lovely to fly free on the wings!
Thanks Anita :D
DeleteAwe-stuck!
ReplyDeleteVery nice and romantic :)
Thanks Satya :-)
Deletea you stuck me...smiles...this was cute...and some silences are def worth breaking...if love is involved...
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
DeleteVery beautiful lines, and surely Silence is unsaid but surely not unheard
ReplyDeleteLast two lines!!!
ReplyDeleteI love it I love it I love it
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Thank You Rupasi :-)
DeleteI like the expression you-struck me. Very romantic.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
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