Aw, too bad it wasn't real ;)Nicely done
Thank You :-)
Wow.. love this haiku!P.S: The title grabbed my attention. :D
Ha ha ... thanks Mirage :D
nice! most of the awesome things are just that- mirage...alas!
Yes :-)
Beautifully sad.
Thanks Celestine :-)
I like your thought-provoking poem.alas, a miragestumbles on in search of morelife is but a dreamhttps://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/12/15/and-stones-walked-among/
Thank You Alice for these beautiful lines :-)
"alas, a mirage" - such an unexpected, powerful and perfect last line.
Sometimes life have a surprise for us, or is it just an illusion :p
Enjoy till the surprise last :D
Beautiful! :)
Thanks Satya :-)
I know how you feel ... found a chunk of gold in a Alaska river once ... turned out to be fool's gold ... still have it, because it sparkles ... smiles ... Love, cat.
Thank You Cat :-)
Sad, yet beautiful. :)
Very emotional Haiku.
alas, a miragehe strides in search, hopes highlife's an eternal dream
Well said :-)
A beauty in any sense...for what is and isn't at the same time. Lovely. From this haiku ..I get Hope
Thanks Jazzy :-)
our knowledge is a receding mirage in an expanding desert of ignorance !! beautiful lines of mesmerizing imagination wrapped in illusion:))
Thank You Adhi :-)
This is a ruby indeed,not a mirage.
Thanks Sarala :-)
Astounding
Thank You so much :-)
Aw, too bad it wasn't real ;)
ReplyDeleteNicely done
Thank You :-)
DeleteWow.. love this haiku!
ReplyDeleteP.S: The title grabbed my attention. :D
Ha ha ... thanks Mirage :D
Deletenice! most of the awesome things are just that- mirage...alas!
ReplyDeleteYes :-)
DeleteBeautifully sad.
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteI like your thought-provoking poem.
ReplyDeletealas, a mirage
stumbles on in search of more
life is but a dream
https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/12/15/and-stones-walked-among/
Thank You Alice for these beautiful lines :-)
Delete"alas, a mirage" - such an unexpected, powerful and perfect last line.
ReplyDeleteSometimes life have a surprise for us, or is it just an illusion :p
ReplyDeleteEnjoy till the surprise last :D
DeleteBeautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :-)
DeleteI know how you feel ... found a chunk of gold in a Alaska river once ... turned out to be fool's gold ... still have it, because it sparkles ... smiles ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteThank You Cat :-)
DeleteSad, yet beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteVery emotional Haiku.
ReplyDeletealas, a mirage
ReplyDeletehe strides in search, hopes high
life's an eternal dream
Well said :-)
DeleteA beauty in any sense...for what is and isn't at the same time. Lovely. From this haiku ..I get Hope
ReplyDeleteThanks Jazzy :-)
Deleteour knowledge is a receding mirage in an expanding desert of ignorance !! beautiful lines of mesmerizing imagination wrapped in illusion:))
ReplyDeleteThank You Adhi :-)
DeleteThis is a ruby indeed,not a mirage.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :-)
DeleteAstounding
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
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