I am amazed at the power of few words that trigger a series of imagination in one's mind. Nicely written Amrit.
Thanks Shweta :-)
I like both of these because they both seem to carry with them a message of change...
Thank You Keith :-)
Lovely..both of them! :)
Thanks Payal :-)
Amazing imagery I must say
Thank You :-)
Wonderful, and without using the prompt. Very creative. Well done.
Thanks a lot :-)
have a nice Monday, i like the first one more, the surprise at Line 3 is quite nicemuch love...
Thank You Gillena :-)
Love your haikus. have a great week!
Thanks Ruby :-)
These two really got me remembering, Amrit. Each year our orchestra "lived on a train" for six weeks. And the stories were, well...ALL THE WAY (as you say!)Nicely done, I L I K E.
Thank You Steve :-)
A kissing breeze.. that could mean so much..
Thanks Bjorn :-)
A caterpillar... ;) You have a brilliant mind Amrit, I always enjoy reading your work! Be proud of it my friend!
Thank You so much Crystal :-)
A lot of fast movements evoked from those involved with slow processes. A caterpillar needs to 'run' fast for all these. Nicely Amrit!Hank
Thanks Hank :-)
Very beautiful....you captured it in so short words.....nice!!
Thank You Sreeja :-)
As a child I used to imagine that there is this movie playing out side the train's window! Thanks for bringing a part of my childhood back to me
Thanks DG :-)
Lovely imagery.
So aptly written for the prompt! Amazing! Loved your Haiku, Amrit. :)
Thanks Balqis :-)
The scenes you piece together in such few words :)
Very nice! Loving the caterpillar. :)
Loved the way you picturised a running train as a slithering caterpillar Amrit. The thought of kissing breeze made me smile and blush :)
Thank You Reshma :-)
Love your caterpillar! In fact both are such lovely haiku and great imagery.
Thanks Georgia :-)
Love the caterpillar also. Inspired original ideas:)
Awesome takes on the prompt! loved the second one more :)
Thanks Ankita :-)
I am amazed at the power of few words that trigger a series of imagination in one's mind. Nicely written Amrit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shweta :-)
DeleteI like both of these because they both seem to carry with them a message of change...
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-)
DeleteLovely..both of them! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Payal :-)
DeleteAmazing imagery I must say
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteWonderful, and without using the prompt. Very creative. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
Deletehave a nice Monday, i like the first one more, the surprise at Line 3 is quite nice
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thank You Gillena :-)
DeleteLove your haikus. have a great week!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruby :-)
DeleteThese two really got me remembering, Amrit. Each year our orchestra "lived on a train" for six weeks. And the stories were, well...ALL THE WAY (as you say!)
ReplyDeleteNicely done, I L I K E.
Thank You Steve :-)
DeleteA kissing breeze.. that could mean so much..
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
DeleteA caterpillar... ;) You have a brilliant mind Amrit, I always enjoy reading your work! Be proud of it my friend!
ReplyDeleteThank You so much Crystal :-)
DeleteA lot of fast movements evoked from those involved with slow processes. A caterpillar needs to 'run' fast for all these. Nicely Amrit!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteVery beautiful....you captured it in so short words.....nice!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
DeleteAs a child I used to imagine that there is this movie playing out side the train's window! Thanks for bringing a part of my childhood back to me
ReplyDeleteThanks DG :-)
DeleteLovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteSo aptly written for the prompt! Amazing! Loved your Haiku, Amrit. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Balqis :-)
DeleteThe scenes you piece together in such few words :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Loving the caterpillar. :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the way you picturised a running train as a slithering caterpillar Amrit. The thought of kissing breeze made me smile and blush :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Reshma :-)
DeleteLove your caterpillar! In fact both are such lovely haiku and great imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks Georgia :-)
DeleteLove the caterpillar also. Inspired original ideas:)
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteAwesome takes on the prompt! loved the second one more :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :-)
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