Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Branch

swinging by its hands
I miss the childhood gone by
that familiar shade


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons - branch.


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30 comments:

  1. Tabitha Charlotte Lionhart9/10/2014 12:02:00 pm

    Now this is a perfect haiku. So many emotions conveyed by those simple words. Wonderful writing as always, Amrit :)

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  2. Unknown9/10/2014 03:04:00 pm

    Nice Haiku Amrit.

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  3. Datta Ghosh9/10/2014 03:53:00 pm

    We all miss the childhood....the perfect longing

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  4. Optimistic Existentialist9/10/2014 04:31:00 pm

    What wonderful memories indeed :)

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  5. Soumya9/10/2014 06:17:00 pm

    Oh yeah! I miss the branch I used to hang from too :P

    No, seriously!

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  6. Locomente9/10/2014 07:53:00 pm

    Nostalgic...
    And a great take on the prompt!!!

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  7. Anonymous9/10/2014 08:25:00 pm

    Good one...nostalgia

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  8. Ramesh Sood9/10/2014 10:23:00 pm

    Lovely haiku.. Have a look ...did we think similar in one of mine...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/09/branch-of-old-tree-haiku.html

    RS

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  9. Red Handed9/10/2014 11:29:00 pm

    oh wow! that was wow!

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  10. cheryl9/11/2014 04:59:00 am

    This is very tender Amrit, evoking fond memories

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  11. Jyotsna Bhatia9/11/2014 08:18:00 am

    Super !!

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  12. Unknown9/11/2014 02:21:00 pm

    Remembering olden days? Very sweet Haiku.

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  13. rallentanda9/11/2014 06:35:00 pm

    Well crafted haiku. Nice !

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  14. Balqis DBJ9/11/2014 09:43:00 pm

    Those sweet days will never be forgotten. Beautifully conveyed. :)

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  15. Anonymous9/11/2014 11:52:00 pm

    '' a thousand different gourds from a single vine '' ....a complete story by those few words !

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  16. Judith Westerfield9/12/2014 12:26:00 am

    poignant and perfect.

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  17. Anonymous9/12/2014 12:59:00 am

    Wonderful childhood memories --

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  18. rudraprayaga9/13/2014 03:01:00 pm

    Nostalgic,Amrit.

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