Thursday, February 21, 2013

Turquoise Ring

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turquoise ring
swims in the lake
with swans


This Haiku is shared with NaHaiWriMo (Feb 21) - Turquoise.





22 comments:

  1. interesting....turquoise is a cool color...and swans are beautifulllso nice imagery...makes me wonder if you had something deeper in it though i am not getting...

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    1. Nothing deeper Brian ... just visualized the scene and wrote :-)

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  2. Turquoise is one of my favorite colors :)

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  3. love the visual
    I'm always amazed that haiku can say so much with so little
    and you do it well

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    1. That's the magic of haiku ... and I am just learning :-)

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  4. I need to get busy on this prompt.. I hope I can catch it before it ends... Turquoise and swans... Beautiful gem and a beautiful bird.. put them together and you've got a series of beautiful words... Thank you for sharing Amrit!

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  5. wonderful imagination, put in exquisite words.

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  6. Perfect! You are getting better everyday. :D

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  7. Turquoise is really a cool color ..and your words are refreshing ..nice

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  8. Simply wonderful GS!! The words bring out the image in the minds eye...

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  9. Well expressed! I love turquoise.

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