Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Shade Tree

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under this shade tree
we sing hundred songs of rain
and you collect clouds


This Haiku is shared with NaHaiWriMo (February 13) - Shade Tree.





32 comments:

  1. What a beautifully unique thought here!

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  2. I love summer afternoons under the shade tree...good times :)

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  3. I read this Haiku several times just to make that smile retain on my face :) I reach out my hands for collecting the clouds too. This is a beautiful Haiku :)

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    1. I am glad I could make you smile :-)

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  4. Rain and shade of the tree - a romantic juxtaposition

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    1. Yes they go perfectly together :-)

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  5. Thank you for this exquisite haiku.

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  6. Beautiful... I only wish trees remain for the future generations to gather memorable clouds...

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    1. I hope so too ... we should preserve nature now !!!

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  7. Small, deep, fetching and lovely...

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    1. And this makes my heart warmer :-)

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  9. Inspiring verses. I can feel the song and rain in this haiku.

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  10. Collecting clouds is so romantic!

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  11. This is really nice...I liked the picture!:)
    And congratulations on getting published in the very famous (Bestseller I guess) anthology...:)

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    1. Thank You Tarang ... and yes, it is a bestseller now (thankfully) :-P

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  12. I just read your Paper boat poem and this one!! It felt like I was about to taste something simply marvelous and it ended RIGHT then!

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    1. ooops ... I hope it didn't disappoint you :-P

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