Saturday, February 23, 2013

Bedroom

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secrets shared
amid muted tears
in bedroom


This Haiku is shared with NaHaiWriMo (Feb 23) - Bedroom.





25 comments:

  1. liebster nomination for you my dear friend :) check out the link http://www.malinymohan.com/2013/02/liebster-ceremony.html

    p.s : i will be back to comment about the haiku in a while .

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  2. secrets and tears..best define our bedroom...
    liked it..:)
    keep writing..:)

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  3. Nice haiku derived through observations!

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  4. thus the danger of secrets...hopefully more joys than tears are shared in the bedroom...

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  5. Some secrets can be joyful to share, while others can be painful

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  6. Hopefully some of the tears were tears of happiness!

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    1. That would be something to be happy :-)

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  7. aah...'muted tears..?? Awesome!

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  8. Beautiful lines, the one place where your heartfelt feelings find expression...

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  9. Indeed the bedroom is a lover of secrets. :-)

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  10. very insightful! Bedroom is a keeper of hushed secrets.

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  11. The place where all emotions find destiny . Beautiful :)

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