Sunday, February 17, 2013

Black Stains

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black stains
she reads false promises
on humid letter


This Haiku is shared with NaHaiWriMo (Feb 17) - Black.





16 comments:

  1. I just cried for joy because of my playful kitten ... never ever will I allow myself to cry again for false promises of any human though ...

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    1. Yes ... humans can't keep promises !!!

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  2. I like black stains, an excellent metaphor ~

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  3. wonderful haiku ~ the tears making the paper humid ~ creative! ^_^

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  4. I too like black stains..emotions poured out well..

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  5. wonderful! I agree with Grace, black stains is an excellent metaphor!

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  6. to read them and know they are false, would def stain the relationship black...

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  7. falsity always leaves a black stain behind...beautifully crafted lines!!

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