Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Renewal



You can shout as much as you want, but the truth is my friend, you got to go. Thanks for the smiles, and the wounds. You made me weaker, and stronger. However, the time has now come to start a new chapter. Memories need to be erased. A better life waits just around the corner.


This 55 words Micro-Fiction is shared with Picture It And Write.






26 comments:

  1. "You made me weaker, and stronger"...that's very effective. I think we can all identify with having been in that type of relationship at one time or another.

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  2. Wow! Really good one, this is!

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  3. Strong stuff,,,onward and upward,,,enjoyed this,,

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  4. very emphatic write up, short but convincing

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  5. a profound message told in a few lines . nice take on the picture prompt :)

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  6. My teacher used to say "Nothing is permanent except change"

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  7. Sometimes its necessary to let go and move on however hard it might be... Nice micro-fiction!!

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  8. Good job in a short space. I like that: you can yell all you want but you gotta go.

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  9. I am back to the magic world :)

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