Saturday, February 16, 2013

Red Petals

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red petals
drowned in tears
a love lost


This Haiku is shared with NaHaiWriMo (Feb 16) - Red.




28 comments:

  1. lost love is painful...i like how that contrasts with the petals....soft to hard....

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  2. There is a hidden story behind your haiku which is both alluring and intriguing.

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  3. The feeling it conveys makes a tear trickle down my face.
    Great Haiku.

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  4. Lost love ultimately leads to found love...

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    1. They are all interlinked, isn't it? :-)

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  5. Expresses very well the sadness of lost love.

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  6. Red color is typically used to show passion. However, you have used it to depict sadness here. I like this perspective. You are doing wonderfully in the haiku world.
    Your blog looks great with this new setup.
    Have a great week ahead! :)

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    1. Thanks Sui ... you too have a great weekend :-)

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  7. I really like the haiku, of delicate sadness.

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  8. the image coupled with the lines have tenderly brought out the hurt of lost love...

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  9. For reasons inexplicable, I really loved these lines :) Found them to be something I could relate to....

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    1. I am glad it struck a chord with you :-)

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  10. Very sad, but also beautiful,,,this is how these things can be,,,always a paradox,,,

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    1. There is beauty hidden everywhere I guess !!!

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  11. "They" say: Opposites attract ... there is the "they" word again ... I wonder who "they" are ... "they" anger me ...

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  12. Picture is so apt, even the flower is looking sad. Even the most beautiful things can be so melancholic.

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    1. True ... tears and smiles are two faces of the same coin !!!

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