Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Fruitless Blossoms



Fruitless blossoms bloom
Waving joyfully at the sun
Cotton clouds romance.

Cotton clouds romance
In the Garden of Eden
Adam smiles at Eve.

Adam smiles at Eve
Chirpy birds sing love lyrics
Violins rain music.

Violins rain music
Rainbow across horizon
Fruitless blossoms bloom.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Fruitless Blossoms.





30 comments:

  1. Wow! how yo manage it everytime! mesmerising!!

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  2. A very nice progression.

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  3. Beyond gorgeous. You have a poignant way with words.

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  4. Adam and Eve... very nice subjects... I wish I could play a violin. That would be wickedly cool!

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  5. Adam smiling at Eve and vice versa...then the REAL blossoming begins!

    Beaten by the Rain

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  6. Awesome cascading haiku series Green. Nicely done ... I have read this one several times ... with every read it became more gorgeous. Thank you for sharing this treasure on Carpe Diem.

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  7. I agree with Mary - a very nice progression indeed.

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  8. I like this cascading haiku. The flow is perfect,,,,favourite line "cotton clouds romance",,,so well done,,,

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  9. So much to like here.
    "Cotton Clouds romance" is a special sighting.

    Violins in Eden?
    Wonderful!

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  10. The first haiku is a masterpiece! You had me right there at the first with "cotton cloud romance" Brilliant.

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  11. Yes I liked the cotton clouds too..maybe the fruitless things in life are the most meaningful in a way..fruitful in their cottony cloudiness..Jae

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  12. I loved the violin rain music. Made me think of sad music. :-)

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  13. Lovely...."Cotton Clouds romance" robbed my heart. I want to write haiku, but the syllable counting puts me off. I find it extremely confusing :((

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    1. Don't worry about the syllables. That will come with practice. Just try once and I am sure it will be a real treat to read :-)

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