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Fruitless blossoms bloom
Waving joyfully at the sun
Cotton clouds romance.
Cotton clouds romance
In the Garden of Eden
Adam smiles at Eve.
Adam smiles at Eve
Chirpy birds sing love lyrics
Violins rain music.
Violins rain music
Rainbow across horizon
Fruitless blossoms bloom.
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Fruitless Blossoms.
Wow! how yo manage it everytime! mesmerising!!
ReplyDeleteI wanna learn :0
ReplyDeleteIt's easy :-)
DeleteA very nice progression.
ReplyDeleteI like "violins rain music"
ReplyDeleteFruitless Blossoms
Thank You Becca :-)
DeleteBeyond gorgeous. You have a poignant way with words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ben :-)
DeleteAdam and Eve... very nice subjects... I wish I could play a violin. That would be wickedly cool!
ReplyDeleteThank You Noblesse :-)
DeleteAdam smiling at Eve and vice versa...then the REAL blossoming begins!
ReplyDeleteBeaten by the Rain
Ha ha ... well said :-)
DeleteAwesome cascading haiku series Green. Nicely done ... I have read this one several times ... with every read it became more gorgeous. Thank you for sharing this treasure on Carpe Diem.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mary - a very nice progression indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank You buddy :-)
DeleteI like this cascading haiku. The flow is perfect,,,,favourite line "cotton clouds romance",,,so well done,,,
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellecee :-)
DeleteSo much to like here.
ReplyDelete"Cotton Clouds romance" is a special sighting.
Violins in Eden?
Wonderful!
Thank You Steve :-)
DeleteThe first haiku is a masterpiece! You had me right there at the first with "cotton cloud romance" Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lolly :-)
DeleteYes I liked the cotton clouds too..maybe the fruitless things in life are the most meaningful in a way..fruitful in their cottony cloudiness..Jae
ReplyDeleteWell said Jae :-)
DeleteI loved the violin rain music. Made me think of sad music. :-)
ReplyDeleteIt could be happy too :-)
DeleteLovely...."Cotton Clouds romance" robbed my heart. I want to write haiku, but the syllable counting puts me off. I find it extremely confusing :((
ReplyDeleteDon't worry about the syllables. That will come with practice. Just try once and I am sure it will be a real treat to read :-)
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