Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Snow Play



"Can I go out to play, Mom?"

"Ask Dad."

"Dad?"

"Hmm."

"Can I go out to play?"

"Let the sun set."

"But why?"

"Do you want to melt in this heat?"


This 140 characters Micro-fiction is shared with Succinctly Yours New Week 91.




24 comments:

  1. I did not see where this was going... And I totally should have :).

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  2. lol...poor snow man (boy) doesn't stand a chance lol

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  3. Very clever! Children will be children, whether they are snow children or human children. Smiles.

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  4. Nice, G.S. I love your punch line, 'Do you want to melt in this heat?'

    My mother had a saying about us kids having to walk in the rain (no umbrellas for kids, we were real poor--Mom may not have had one herself). It was "You won't melt."
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    1. I love your life stories Jim :-) Have a great day !!!

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  5. I'd love to melt for a while ... Greetings from Canada :)

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    1. It's good to melt and rise again :-)

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  6. amazing! Amrit, so cute, lovely! very imginative!

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  7. Very creative and cute :-)

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  8. Haha! Very cute and nice imagination :)

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  9. What a cute story! Do you suppose that sunscreen would help? :D

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    1. I am not sure, perhaps you can suggest them :-)

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  10. Cute and clever SY story! Father knows best.

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