(Image Source: http://magpietales.blogspot.in/2012/12/mag-147.html)
Latitudes and longitudes
Mere lines - not anymore
Unraveling the mystery
As I run through hills and valleys
Across your silken terrain
Up and down
Down and up
Aligning the travel curve
Geographical lust
I draw the path of bliss
In this garden of love.
This Poem is shared with The Mag.
I like your travel guide...and mapping system
ReplyDeleteFabulous!
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteWhat beautiful lines in every way Green Speck....I love this!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Carrie :-)
DeleteThis is the poem of a trule hopeless romantic. Beautiful work!
ReplyDelete*true not trule haha I need to proofread better.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... happens with me too ;-)
DeleteBeautifully sensual interpretation of the picture!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
DeleteThe pleasure of map-reading and map-treading,GS! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank You Hank :-)
DeleteSweet poem and picture.
ReplyDeleteThanks Stas :-)
DeleteOutstanding and provocative. I like this very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandy :-)
Deleteawsm awsm awsm.....luvng it :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sadia :-)
Deletespeechless, what do I say!
ReplyDeleteWow! You've amazingly used the prompt. The poem is awesome :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sayantini :-)
DeleteWowwww! Brilliant interpretation. It couldn't be better than this.
ReplyDeleteloved it...Absolutely!
Thanks buddy :-)
DeleteThe emotion and feeling are spot on. You've really created a sensation.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ben :-)
Delete"Your silken terrain..." Remarkable...
ReplyDeleteThanks Berowne :-)
DeleteI particularly like the title and opening lines,
ReplyDelete"Latitudes and longitudes
Mere lines - not anymore
Unraveling the mystery..."
Thank You my friend :-)
Deletequite something !! very impressive !
ReplyDeleteThanks Enigma :-)
DeleteThis is lovely. Well done:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Tigerbrite :-)
DeleteGeographical lust ... you give new meaning to the study of geography!!!
ReplyDeleteHa ha :-)
DeleteSuperb write.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thanks Anna :-)
DeleteGeographically lust, indeed...
ReplyDeletePerhaps ;-)
Delete...like the prompt this week, your take is digging and tracing... an affirmation to a true experimental piece... the notion of drawing a path of bliss in this garden of love is stunning... great job... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelvin :-)
DeleteGeological lust - very cool!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
DeleteThe magnet south, can lure sailors onto the rocks.
ReplyDeleteWell, that's true as well ;-)
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