Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Latitudes And Longitudes



Latitudes and longitudes
Mere lines - not anymore
Unraveling the mystery
As I run through hills and valleys
Across your silken terrain
Up and down
Down and up
Aligning the travel curve
Geographical lust
I draw the path of bliss
In this garden of love.


This Poem is shared with The Mag.






48 comments:

  1. I like your travel guide...and mapping system

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  2. What beautiful lines in every way Green Speck....I love this!!

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  3. This is the poem of a trule hopeless romantic. Beautiful work!

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  4. *true not trule haha I need to proofread better.

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  5. Beautifully sensual interpretation of the picture!

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  6. The pleasure of map-reading and map-treading,GS! Nicely done!

    Hank

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  7. Outstanding and provocative. I like this very much.

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  8. awsm awsm awsm.....luvng it :)

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  9. Wow! You've amazingly used the prompt. The poem is awesome :)

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  10. Wowwww! Brilliant interpretation. It couldn't be better than this.

    loved it...Absolutely!

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  11. The emotion and feeling are spot on. You've really created a sensation.

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  12. "Your silken terrain..." Remarkable...

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  13. I particularly like the title and opening lines,
    "Latitudes and longitudes
    Mere lines - not anymore
    Unraveling the mystery..."

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  14. quite something !! very impressive !

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  15. Geographical lust ... you give new meaning to the study of geography!!!

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  16. Geographically lust, indeed...

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  17. ...like the prompt this week, your take is digging and tracing... an affirmation to a true experimental piece... the notion of drawing a path of bliss in this garden of love is stunning... great job... smiles...

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  18. The magnet south, can lure sailors onto the rocks.

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