Monday, December 03, 2012

Between You And Me

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Between you and me
The world will sway
As we light up the sun
And paint the moon
In our canvas of love
Red, green and blue.

Between you and me
Creation will answer
Myriad questions
That lie buried in the sand
Where we build castles
In the sea of dreams.

Between you and me
Closets lay bare
Skeletons tumble out
Narrating their tales
Of fairies and demons
Who pass by our fate.

Between you and me
Nectar savored
At the edge of our lips
The joy of passion
Uncovered, discovered
Ecstasy gets a name.

Between you and me
Lies the mountain of trust
Weaving this magic of undying love.


This Poem is shared with Sunday Scribblings and the Prompt is Between You and Me.









44 comments:

  1. between you and me such nice interpretation! Good job :)

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  2. I like this beautiful love poem.

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  3. Very nice, G.S. ~~ It makes me wish I could write nice love poems.
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    1. I especially like the verse,
      Nectar savored
      At the edge of our lips
      The joy of passion
      Uncovered, discovered
      Ecstasy gets a name.

      and your writing here of passion discoverable. Internal rhyme, covered, 'un' and 'dis,' was a pleasant surprise.
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    2. Thank You so much Jim. You are one of those bloggers I really admire and look up to for inspiration. Thanks for appreciating my work. Your comments are always a pleasure :-)

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  4. Beautiful in every way!
    Oh, that it is so.

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  5. Amazing, beautiful! 'uncover discover'-You are a master at play of words. Every line is just wow!

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  6. Every line is precious here... beautiful poem!

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  7. Again touchy....keep up the good work...

    http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

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  8. Lies the mountain of trust
    Weaving this magic of undying love

    That sums it all,undying love shared between 2 souls. Nicely GS!

    Hank

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  9. Simply brilliant ! And very lyrical . I felt the emotional vibe while reading it. I just loved it. well done !

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  10. really amazing and beautiful :)

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  11. You discover and undiscover and learn to chose and learn to appreciate and learn to forgive ... amazing words, Mr. Green ... Love, cat.

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  12. Between you and me, I think this is beautiful. Some of your imagery is just... amazing. Loved this
    Nectar savored
    At the edge of our lips
    The joy of passion
    Uncovered, discovered

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  13. Two people who love one another are a formidable force. Great love poem.

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  14. Beautifully put. Full of caring and trust and love. Thank you.

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  15. my favorite -
    Between you and me
    Closets lay bare
    Skeletons tumble out
    Narrating their tales
    Of fairies and demons
    Who pass by our fate.

    This shows so well how strong this love is..

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  16. Every stanza stand out on its own, singing the tale of true love. WOOOW, Greeny this was the bestest poem from you :) Take care!

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  17. Between you and me and everyone fortunate enough to read your poem, this is beautiful! Such love expressed in your words!

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  18. The world will sway
    As we light up the sun
    And paint the moon
    In our canvas of love

    Love that!

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