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"Why can't you love me, Dearie?"
"Because you are not a human. You are a ghost."
"But what's that got to do with my emotions, Dearie?"
"Ok. Tell me. Do you have a heart to feel this love?"
"Oops. Err ... I guess I lost it somewhere while playing basket-heart with the other zombies yesterday."
This 55 words Micro-fiction is shared with Best 55 Fictionist Contest and the Prompt is Ghost.
Haha ! Woow, you gave a comic twist to the word ghost. So innovative, loved it. :) It was a hilarious one :)Awesome first try buddy :) :D
ReplyDeleteThanks for encouraging me through this :-)
DeleteI was expecting it to be smthng else lyk somethng spooky....but u jus gave it a diff yet an extraordinary flavor....;)
ReplyDeleteJust tried to make it different :-)
Delete:):) good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Meenakshi :-)
DeleteHaha...spooky things can be humorous at the same time!! Good one :)
ReplyDeleteBasket-heart? Really??????? :D
ReplyDeleteHahaha! :P This is cute and I was imagining the lovely ghost in the picture speaking to his beloved, and that sounded funnier than ever. :D
Thanks Vaishali :-)
DeleteHaha!..really funny! Enjoyed reading your ghost story :D
ReplyDeleteI really get such kind of stories in my dreams :D
This gave me a smile! Fun.
ReplyDeleteReally I expect this kind of Innovation... :) really a good one... thanks for participating Green Speck... take care...!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sasikumar :-)
DeleteGreat fun. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
Delete""Oops. Err ... I guess I lost it somewhere while playing basket-heart with the other zombies yesterday." Too cute, some people do that and their not even ghosts :-) Good stuff,,,
ReplyDeleteThank You Ellecee :-)
DeleteThis is so funny ~ This made my night..he..he...
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
DeleteI enjoyed the humor. It was touching and sweet.
ReplyDeleteLol awesome :)
ReplyDeleteLOL! What fun!
ReplyDelete:-)
DeleteHe is a lovely little ghost ... welcome in my house ... anytime :)
ReplyDeleteYa he is very friendly :-)
DeleteThat was cute.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rohini :-)
DeleteI thought it was going to be something like 'Jini aur juju' (in case you watch hindi programmes :P) but the twist was too good :) made your fiction quite a different :)
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... naah, just tried to do it a bit differently :-)
DeleteHi there, good to see you participating in the contest. This one's a nice blend of paranormal with humor. Good one!
ReplyDeleteWish you all the best with the contest...
Btw, first time here. You have a nice blog, following it :)
Thank you buddy :-)
DeleteI like stories told through dialogue. It's hard to get it right, but you do, Green Speck.
ReplyDeleteGood luck to you.
a very sweet romantically haunted lovestory
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :-)
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