Sunday, December 30, 2012

Ancient Road

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Ancient road
I crossed once before
My feet hurt.

My feet hurt
Dusty and weary
Sun sets now.

Sun sets now
Birds fly to their nest
Here am lost.

Here am lost
Help me find my way
Ancient road.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Ancient Road.







32 comments:

  1. Until you get lost you can never discover something new :)

    Beautiful lines!

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  2. You'll find your way. Nice one.

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  3. i think we all get lost more than what we realize and it's always good to be back home.. Lovely Haiku Amrit!!

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  4. A poem really delicious. If you know your way.

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  5. Getting lost is part of the fun of the journey!

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  6. Wonderful set of haiku ~ yes being 'lost' is all part of the ancient road ~ ^_^

    (A Creative Harbor aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^)

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  7. Birds know the way to their nests, but you are lost... excellent haiku full of melancholy.
    Hope you can find your way.
    :)

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  8. Getting lost is
    Always an adventure
    I like the way you chained these
    Cheers!
    JzB

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  9. Nice journey by the ancient road!! Great lines!

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  10. Green ... this is a wonderful cascading haiku ... sometimes we all losing our path. Life is like the 'ancient road' of Buson. Thanks for sharing.

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  11. Loved it :)

    And Happy New Year to you Mr. Speck!

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    1. Thanks Kiara ... You too have a great new year :-)

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  12. I guess m walkng the same road these days....nice one buddy :)

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    1. And am sure you will find the path soon :-)

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  13. Simple and lovely :)
    Wishing you a new year in adv !

    Take care

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    1. Thanks Fatima. May you have a great 2013 :-)

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  14. A reincarnation of a kind....except memory of the route is a bit fuzzy....totally enjoyed ....

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  15. I love the tone and feeling of this.

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