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Ancient road
I crossed once before
My feet hurt.
My feet hurt
Dusty and weary
Sun sets now.
Sun sets now
Birds fly to their nest
Here am lost.
Here am lost
Help me find my way
Ancient road.
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Ancient Road.
Until you get lost you can never discover something new :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines!
Very true Divya :-)
DeleteYou'll find your way. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
Deletei think we all get lost more than what we realize and it's always good to be back home.. Lovely Haiku Amrit!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Crystal :-)
DeleteA poem really delicious. If you know your way.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leovi :-)
DeleteGetting lost is part of the fun of the journey!
ReplyDeleteWell said :-)
DeleteWonderful set of haiku ~ yes being 'lost' is all part of the ancient road ~ ^_^
ReplyDelete(A Creative Harbor aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^)
Thank You Carol :-)
DeleteBirds know the way to their nests, but you are lost... excellent haiku full of melancholy.
ReplyDeleteHope you can find your way.
:)
Getting lost is
ReplyDeleteAlways an adventure
I like the way you chained these
Cheers!
JzB
Thank You JzB :-)
DeleteNice journey by the ancient road!! Great lines!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sayantini :-)
DeleteGreen ... this is a wonderful cascading haiku ... sometimes we all losing our path. Life is like the 'ancient road' of Buson. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLoved it :)
ReplyDeleteAnd Happy New Year to you Mr. Speck!
Thanks Kiara ... You too have a great new year :-)
DeleteI guess m walkng the same road these days....nice one buddy :)
ReplyDeleteAnd am sure you will find the path soon :-)
DeleteSimple and lovely :)
ReplyDeleteWishing you a new year in adv !
Take care
Thanks Fatima. May you have a great 2013 :-)
DeleteA reincarnation of a kind....except memory of the route is a bit fuzzy....totally enjoyed ....
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this very much
ReplyDeleteI love the tone and feeling of this.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
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