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Candle weeps its last
Melting glow fighting for life
New flame burns within.
New flame burns within
As I sweep across dark clouds
Embracing dear moon.
Embracing dear moon
If you write my fate tonight
Gift me seven stars.
Gift me seven stars
I will fly them with my kites
No rain today, please.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is New.
I like gift me with the seven stars ~
ReplyDeleteWishing you more gifts for 2013 ~
Happy New Year ~
Happy New Year Grace :-)
DeleteYes, seven stars would be a wonderful gift indeed!
ReplyDelete:-)
DeleteFor some reason, "new flame" to me signifies the coming New Year. Have a great one my friend :)
ReplyDeleteYou too have a great 2013 :-)
Deleteoh how beautiful.. and lovely!!! I could read it all day.. the gentleness, the innocence and there's something magical about embracing the moon..
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal. Just trying to learn these qualities from your creations :-)
Deleteyou make me fall short of words.....smthng toooo deep hidden here ....loving it :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sadia. Your comments motivate me as always :-)
DeleteLovely, Green Speck! The last verse is simply gorgeous. I would love to be gifted with seven stars!
ReplyDeleteThanks WabiSabi :-)
DeleteFull of dream and imagination. Beautiful haiku.
ReplyDeleteDelicious set of haiku, Green Speck. I love your kites flying to the seven stars.
ReplyDeleteLet's pray the flame inside us be always alive in spite of storms.
Happy New Year!
:)
Thanks Dulcina :-)
Delete"No rain today please" brings all the soaring down to earth - perfect last line.
ReplyDeleteThank You Judith :-)
DeleteOh, this is a beautiful cascade
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteI like the interlinking here as it strings the beauty across my room like stars int he night. May you have all 7. Happy new year.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Susan :-)
DeleteThis poem soars! Thanks for sharing your words! Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Barbara :-)
DeleteMay your new year be filled with moonlight and stardust :)
ReplyDeleteSame to you Tigerbrite .... Have a great 2013 :-)
Delete"New Flame burns within "leaves positive energy..Lovely!! Wishing you and your family a wonderful year ahead. :)keep writing,keep growing..
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz ... Happy New Year to you as well :-)
Deletelove the way you have crafted this haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Neha :-)
DeleteSpirited and wishful Haiku, loved the cascade :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteAh! What a thought! I wish you the seven starts and everything else you wish for!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Meenakshi :-)
DeleteBeautiful thoughts, GS.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
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