Sunday, December 30, 2012

New Flame Burns Within



Candle weeps its last
Melting glow fighting for life
New flame burns within.

New flame burns within
As I sweep across dark clouds
Embracing dear moon.

Embracing dear moon
If you write my fate tonight
Gift me seven stars.

Gift me seven stars
I will fly them with my kites
No rain today, please.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is New.










36 comments:

  1. I like gift me with the seven stars ~

    Wishing you more gifts for 2013 ~

    Happy New Year ~

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  2. Yes, seven stars would be a wonderful gift indeed!

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  3. For some reason, "new flame" to me signifies the coming New Year. Have a great one my friend :)

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  4. oh how beautiful.. and lovely!!! I could read it all day.. the gentleness, the innocence and there's something magical about embracing the moon..

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    1. Thanks Crystal. Just trying to learn these qualities from your creations :-)

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  5. you make me fall short of words.....smthng toooo deep hidden here ....loving it :)

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    1. Thank You Sadia. Your comments motivate me as always :-)

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  6. Lovely, Green Speck! The last verse is simply gorgeous. I would love to be gifted with seven stars!

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  7. Full of dream and imagination. Beautiful haiku.

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  8. Delicious set of haiku, Green Speck. I love your kites flying to the seven stars.
    Let's pray the flame inside us be always alive in spite of storms.
    Happy New Year!
    :)

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  9. "No rain today please" brings all the soaring down to earth - perfect last line.

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  10. I like the interlinking here as it strings the beauty across my room like stars int he night. May you have all 7. Happy new year.

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  11. This poem soars! Thanks for sharing your words! Happy New Year!

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  12. May your new year be filled with moonlight and stardust :)

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    1. Same to you Tigerbrite .... Have a great 2013 :-)

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  13. "New Flame burns within "leaves positive energy..Lovely!! Wishing you and your family a wonderful year ahead. :)keep writing,keep growing..

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    1. Thanks Odyzz ... Happy New Year to you as well :-)

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  14. love the way you have crafted this haiku :)

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  15. Spirited and wishful Haiku, loved the cascade :)

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  16. Ah! What a thought! I wish you the seven starts and everything else you wish for!!

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