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If wishes were stars
I would pluck them from heaven
Diamonds for your ring.
Diamonds for your ring
Your ecstatic eyes sparkle
My heart hums love tune.
My heart hums love tune
Wandering in wishful bliss
I, losing my way.
I, losing my way
Come across your pink cottage
You open the door.
You open the door
Unwrap twinkling messages
Sweet glances stolen.
Sweet glances stolen
Fairy flies back to her moon
Turns wishes to stars.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Wishes.
holy shit...you are amazing..seriously..:)
ReplyDeleteSo are you :-)
DeleteAhhhhhh...killer u r ...:)
ReplyDeleteNope ... am innocent ;-)
DeleteAnd the circle is completed. Bot not the way your poet writer w's wanting at the start. Clever :)
ReplyDeleteJust tried to do that way, but had to find an alternative :-)
DeleteThis is lovely. It reads almost like a fairy tale yet is so romantic!
ReplyDeleteThanks WabiSabi :-)
Deletebeautifully done
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteThis IS beautiful!
ReplyDelete"turns wishes to stars" such a lovely last line to embrace the haiku
ReplyDeleteThank You Judith :-)
Deletejust beautiful - <3
ReplyDelete"Diamonds for your ring
ReplyDeleteYour ecstatic eyes sparkle
My heart hums love tune"----awesome! In fact, each one of them is a magical piece :)
And..another one from your magic crate!! If wishes were stars....I love the line and I'd love to utter it again and again. Lovely poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy for your constant encouragement :-)
DeleteAnd all the images create such a dazzling story....)))
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it :-)
DeleteFairy tale romance that everyone wishes to come true! Magical is the word! too good!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Meenakshi :-)
DeleteLovely, as usual Mr. Speck :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kiara :-)
DeleteAww.... Cute :)
ReplyDeleteI wish if it could have been possible for you....
I wish I could do this magic :-)
DeleteSIMPLY Beautiful, a profound piece. :) Romance at its best :) Cool!
ReplyDeleteOw, beautifully romantic.
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteBeautiful, as always :) My fave lines would be- "If wishes were stars
ReplyDeleteI would pluck them from heaven
Diamonds for your ring."
Ya those are my favorite lines too :-P
DeleteAh, I love this, a little like a dream:)
ReplyDeleteI love the picture too I used it for a story
http://planetcyberluz.com/2011/06/01/drawing-down-the-moon/
wow Amrit, this is so good... you weaved magic here! The closing lines are really fantastic bringing the dream like magic.
ReplyDeleteThank You so much Sreeja :-)
DeleteWow,so wonderful and romantic, Green Speck!!!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line (difficult task for them all are precious): My heart hums love tune.
:)))
Thanks Dulcina :-)
Deletewonderfully romantic :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Prema :-)
DeleteI'll say to you something one of my teachers once said to me: "The world loves a storyteller."
ReplyDeleteWish Upon a Petal
Thanks my friend :-)
DeleteI love the stars into ring, wishes into stars magic of this narrative set of Haiku, Each is such a lovely image.
ReplyDeleteThank You Susan :-)
DeleteLovely and romantic haiku ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
Deleteromantically written...awesome...totally loved it<3
ReplyDeleteThank You Aishwariya :-)
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