Monday, December 31, 2012

Smoke and Fire


I am not the smoke that you relish
Puffing in its glory
Seeking nirvana
Bliss

No, I am not your toy
And I never would be

Instead
I am the fire
That burns deep within
Fueled with Vengeance galore

Beware
I will ignite the dirt
And turn you into ashes

A New Year. A New Resolution
Eradicate all evils
And Make
This
World
A Better
Place to Live
For Me. For You
And For the Future that hides behind the mirror.



This Poem is shared with The Mag.






34 comments:

  1. I love your style....something it says in words n the rest left for the reader to find ...
    Yes...i too hope that this coming year turns out to be better in all sense...otherwise hopes will be lost n living among animals might seem a better option than living among these evil n sick minded ...

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    1. I agree with you ... May the new year brings promises that can be fulfilled !!!

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  2. strong and powerful.You are the FIRE

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    1. Thanks ... I hope the fire keeps burning ;-)

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  3. I am not the smoke you relish.,.. that is an intriguing line. Smoking (in movies) can appear sexy and then there is always the campfire smoke which I LOVE.... but smoke can be dangerous, too. NIcely done.

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  4. Good to turn all negativity into ashes. I wish you a very happy new year, Green Speck! And much inspiration in the new year.

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    1. Hope you have a great new year too :-)

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  5. Love the notion of igniting the dirt...

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  6. Yes, that's the spirit :-)

    Happy New Year!

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    1. Same to you Raajii ... have a wonderful 2013 :-)

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  7. That's a resolution that more than half of the human population needs to make now. Your poem should be taken as an oath for a better living. :)
    Happy New Year in advance Green Speck! ^^

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  8. Powerful and true Green Speck....an amazing write indeed! :-)

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    1. Thanks Carrie :-) Happy New Year :-)

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  9. Spirit in this here poem Green Speck!

    Anna :o]

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    1. Thank You Anna :-) Happy New Year :-)

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  10. As always. Amazing.
    This made a difference to me though. It made me give smoking a thought. Beyond peace and comfort that it offers.
    Happy New Year
    Take Care :)

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  11. powerful, ready to reveal its dangerous, disastrous side at the slightest provocation. I loved the sheer strength pouring out of words. Apt timing!

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  12. I enjoy your writing ... Happy New Year!!!!

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  13. Hey your right Speck, an unbalanced relation to fire it can surely be , cheers mate

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  14. Fleeting bliss, more will hopefully listen to your warning.

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