Ah lamenting lost and unrequited love...beautiful poem sir.
Pity the lost lover.
Yeah ...
In the end, is not everything crumpled, discarded?Or is all made healthy, whole, good--perfected, in the end?Guess we won't know, until......the end!
And we all wait for that end, with aniticipation :-)
Discarded Love ... shown in crumpled paper, very well done Green. Very nice take on charcoal.
Thanks Kristjaan :-)
I too pity the lost lover :( The haiku goes so well with the crumpled piece of paper! Love is not all that gloomy but in some cases it is :) Nice !
Thanks Tanya :-)
Brilliant use of the word 'tracing' It made this haiku sing for me!
Wow...an awesome one again!!
Thanks Sayantini :-)
The combo of charcoal paper and lost love is brilliant .. the perfect color to describe heartbreak.
Thank You Helen :-)
OUCH ... Nicely done!!Charcoal
Thanks Becca :-)
I agree with Helen... the charcoal paper, crumpled, discarded and lost love... brilliant.
Thank You Bren :-)
Sets the wheels in my mind turning.. racing!!! I can imagine the plot as it unfolds between these three short promising lines.. Very nice Amrit!!!
Thanks Crystal :-)
Oh, for the strength to throw that paper away!
Its really painful at times :-)
Nooooo, uncrinkle it. That is always my hope.
Perhaps you can't do that always :-)
Tracing lover lost...breaks my heart yet love the words...
Thanks Kulasa :-)
How this charcoal, crumpled paper becomes the symbol of discarded lover....amazing! great job Amrit!
Thank You Meenakshi :-)
Awwww! Few words, such emotions!
Thanks Vaishali :-)
Excellent words for a beautiful artistic drawing.
Thank You Margaret :-)
A sad state of affairs, but a fine poem indeed!
Thanks Mary :-)
Ah lamenting lost and unrequited love...beautiful poem sir.
ReplyDeletePity the lost lover.
ReplyDeleteYeah ...
DeleteIn the end, is not everything crumpled, discarded?
ReplyDeleteOr is all made healthy, whole, good--perfected, in the end?
Guess we won't know, until......the end!
And we all wait for that end, with aniticipation :-)
DeleteDiscarded Love ... shown in crumpled paper, very well done Green. Very nice take on charcoal.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeleteI too pity the lost lover :( The haiku goes so well with the crumpled piece of paper! Love is not all that gloomy but in some cases it is :) Nice !
ReplyDeleteThanks Tanya :-)
DeleteBrilliant use of the word 'tracing' It made this haiku sing for me!
ReplyDeleteWow...an awesome one again!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sayantini :-)
DeleteThe combo of charcoal paper and lost love is brilliant .. the perfect color to describe heartbreak.
ReplyDeleteThank You Helen :-)
DeleteOUCH ... Nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteCharcoal
Thanks Becca :-)
DeleteI agree with Helen... the charcoal paper, crumpled, discarded and lost love... brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThank You Bren :-)
DeleteSets the wheels in my mind turning.. racing!!! I can imagine the plot as it unfolds between these three short promising lines.. Very nice Amrit!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal :-)
DeleteOh, for the strength to throw that paper away!
ReplyDeleteIts really painful at times :-)
DeleteNooooo, uncrinkle it. That is always my hope.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you can't do that always :-)
DeleteTracing lover lost...breaks my heart yet love the words...
ReplyDeleteThanks Kulasa :-)
DeleteHow this charcoal, crumpled paper becomes the symbol of discarded lover....amazing! great job Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThank You Meenakshi :-)
DeleteAwwww! Few words, such emotions!
ReplyDeleteThanks Vaishali :-)
DeleteExcellent words for a beautiful artistic drawing.
ReplyDeleteThank You Margaret :-)
DeleteA sad state of affairs, but a fine poem indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
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