Saturday, January 19, 2013

Love Story

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on the moon
one angel sings
beautiful love songs

love story
wrapped with promises
faith and trust

the hermit preaches
peace and nirvana
love, a journey

hand in hand
they walk on thorns
love bleeds joy

mother's lullaby
baby smiles in return
story of love


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Love Story.




38 comments:

  1. I love the hidden story within your poem.

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  2. This poem will warm the heart of all who read it sir. You have a special gift.

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    1. Thank You Sir for such lovely words :-)

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  3. I like the story you have shared... cheers

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  4. Thanks for sharing magic, Mr. G :)

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  5. Baby smiling into its mother's adoring eyes... such a lovely picture you have left me with today.

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  6. Ah, if there is love, then the lovers can even walk on thorns together. Lovely!

    Shadowy Love Story

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  7. Love in all its btfl forms....you portrayed them so well...:)

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  8. Beautiful love story caught in a nicely composed series of haiku. I especially like this one:

    hand in hand
    they walk on thorns
    love bleeds joy

    That's true love.

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  9. "hand in hand
    they walk on thorns
    love bleeds joy"

    Loved these lines....Just awesome! :)

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  10. There can be no love as selfless as that of a mother's. Beautiful piece Green Speck!

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  11. Love can take so many faces, lovely!

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  12. smiles...i like your characters...the hermit...the angel ....the mother...i feel the love in this...

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  13. Love is present all around us, we only need to see with our hearts. loved your take on this beautiful emotion.

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  14. Very beautiful and heartwarming Haiku

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