Friday, November 30, 2012

First Snow


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Winter draws my heart
Descending with the first snow
Polar bears from moon.

Polar bears from moon
Playing across white blanket
Snow man hugs me tight.

Snow man hugs me tight
Gifts me faith and promises.
Striking a sweet note.

Striking a sweet note
Welcome Santa to my world
Winter draws my heart.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is First Snow.




31 comments:

  1. I was I was at good at poetry as you are :-)

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    1. I wish I can go on improving with your constant encouragement :-)

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  2. Wow! Its brimming with Christmas spirit! beautiful!!

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  3. You are ushering the wonders of winter and the holiday season!! :)
    I like the "polar bears from moon!! Delightful!
    First Snow

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  4. Very well crafted cascading haiku Green. I love 'polarbears from moon', and you hit my Christmas feeling already. Thx for sharing.

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  5. "Winter draws my heart." I like that line VERY much!

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  6. There's just something about the first nosw of the year isn't there?

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  7. Wonderfully penned 'first snow' haiku ~ lovely ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  8. :) Santa and snow draw me also.

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  9. love to have a glimpse of the first snow during winter...
    lovely words there by you...:)

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  10. Delicious Post a tight hug. Greetings.

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  11. Interesting how different people react so differently to the arrival of winter ... that's what makes the world go round, I guess ... I love winter and snow, but not for 5 months straight ... and the cold is deadly in Jan and Feb ... I remember lovely winter days in Europe when I was little ... here in AB, Canada winter means suvival of the fittest or else. And Santa has it even worse ... maybe that's why he is coming to the rest of the world to spread his love for children of all ages, hmmm? Love, cat.

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    1. Winter can be harsh. I love the mild coolness that goes with it, not the hard winters !!!

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  12. This is a lovely set of haiku...thank you for sharing...enjoyed immensely.

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  13. The first snow is all excitement as long as the cold is manageable. Great set of cascades, GS!

    Hank

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  14. This is the magical side of winter..when the snow is crisp and white..fluffy like clouds..not black and icy..beautiful..jae

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  15. This is very sweet....loved it...

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