Wednesday, November 07, 2012

Mark? Who?




"You are so pretty."

"Am I? Even Mark was saying so last night... Oops!"

"Mark? Who is Mark?"

"Oh forget it dear. Would you like a kiss?"



This Micro-fiction of 140 Characters is shared with Succinctly Yours.




30 comments:

  1. oh my... to make others smile is a blessing Amrit.

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    1. This really means a lot to me ... thanks Sreeja :-)

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  2. That's a "Gotcha". It happens :-)

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  3. bad! too bad! not the micro fiction, i mean the lady ;)

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    1. Perhaps that's what she thought as wise ;-)

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  5. Oh oh....I would say she was caught!! The kiss was being used as a diversionary technique.

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  6. Oh yes, please do "forget it dear,
    kiss and forget."

    Very nice take on the prompt, G.S.
    ..

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  7. oops?? Lol! I petty the man asking, Who is Mark? Lovely idea & loved the characters & flow of the micro-fiction. Simply, a commendable job done :)

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  8. Hey GS ..um really sorry ..has not been regular hopping and commenting on the posts..was really stuck up hard..Any ways I have always loved reading your poetry and these 140 characters did a mind blowing job..
    loved reading it..
    Cheers
    Happy festive season to you :)

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    1. Thanks Odyzz ... Have a great season too :-)

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  9. Very funny! Good one, Red. Oops, I meant, Green :)

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  10. Very clever. Do you suppose a kiss will distract him?

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  11. She's a heart-breaker...playing the guys...but not too bright! Cute story.

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