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A lady in the bar would frequently treat
This suave guy with her sensuous dance beat.
When the music stopped,
Together they hopped
Away to his suite across the wide street.
This Limerick is shared with Limerick-Off Monday.
Thanks Wrey :-)
ReplyDeleteI really loved the way it rhymes! very well crafted.
ReplyDeleteThank You Meenakshi :-)
DeleteNice insights :D An imaginative one! Liked the sense of rhythm which goes so well with the theme :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tanya :-)
DeleteVery fine limerick, Green Speck,...they are in a hurry!
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Ha ha .. thanks Dulcina :-)
DeleteThose must have been some god dance moves :).
ReplyDeleteI guess so ;-)
DeleteGood one GS!
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
DeleteOOOOPS! GOOD dance moves :)
ReplyDeleteYup I got it :-D
DeleteLovely rhyming and the idea you craved :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Simran :-)
DeleteRhythm divine :P :)
ReplyDeleteha ha ;-)
DeleteLoving the rhyme and sequence!
ReplyDeleteThank You Janie :-)
DeleteWhat cool writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jenny :-)
DeleteThis truly made me laugh out loud. A fun write. I can see it....and chuckle.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteThanks so much for your fun contribution to last week's Limerick-Off!
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