Monday, November 12, 2012

Treat

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A lady in the bar would frequently treat
This suave guy with her sensuous dance beat.
When the music stopped,
Together they hopped
Away to his suite across the wide street.


This Limerick is shared with Limerick-Off Monday.







25 comments:

  1. I really loved the way it rhymes! very well crafted.

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  2. Nice insights :D An imaginative one! Liked the sense of rhythm which goes so well with the theme :)

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  3. Very fine limerick, Green Speck,...they are in a hurry!
    :)

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  4. Those must have been some god dance moves :).

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  5. Lovely rhyming and the idea you craved :-)

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  6. Loving the rhyme and sequence!

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  7. This truly made me laugh out loud. A fun write. I can see it....and chuckle.

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  8. Thanks so much for your fun contribution to last week's Limerick-Off!

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