Flying roses sing
Blessed melody of red love
Nectar on her lips.
Nectar on her lips
He tastes sweetness of the rose
Divine time stands still.
Divine time stands still
Witnessing the game of hearts
Flying roses sing.
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Rose.
Well crafted cascading set of haiku. Very nice romantic scenery. Thank you Green Speck for sharing this set of haiku with Carpe Diem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeleteWow! perfectly romantic!
ReplyDeleteSweet romance in your words! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Buddy :-)
DeleteImpressive! You can shower petal of roses on anyone who reads this.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great compliment. Thank You Sui :-)
DeleteAh! The sweet scent of romance :)
ReplyDeleteLove is sweet :-)
DeleteI like the nectar on her lips lines. Sort of a homage to the gods of love.
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
DeleteBeautiful and intimate! I love roses and your poem captures their essence! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Ella :-)
DeleteI swirled with these beautiful words of love...
ReplyDeleteHow many time can one say 'Beautiful'
ReplyDeleteLove the circle approach in you haiku. Wonderful and romantic.
ReplyDeleteThank You Brudberg :-)
DeleteWonderful set of haiku for 'rose' ~ I can hear and feel the music of 'love' ~ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol :-)
DeleteI would love to sing the song of these roses! Lovely cascade!
ReplyDeleteThank You Wabi :-)
DeleteSweet and lovely !
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala :-)
DeleteLove the progression in this poem, the repeating lines. You just keep getting better and better!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you took the last line of each stanza to repeat in the next stanza and how you ended your poem with the same words as the first line...:)
ReplyDeleteWell I just tried to use the cascading form ... I am glad you liked it :-)
DeleteLovely.. could feel the love!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jerly :-)
DeleteGame of hearts!!! Wow :D
ReplyDeleteThank You Dark Angel :-)
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