Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Flying Roses


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Flying roses sing
Blessed melody of red love
Nectar on her lips.

Nectar on her lips
He tastes sweetness of the rose
Divine time stands still.

Divine time stands still
Witnessing the game of hearts
Flying roses sing.



This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Rose.




34 comments:

  1. Well crafted cascading set of haiku. Very nice romantic scenery. Thank you Green Speck for sharing this set of haiku with Carpe Diem.

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  2. Impressive! You can shower petal of roses on anyone who reads this.

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    1. That's a great compliment. Thank You Sui :-)

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  3. Ah! The sweet scent of romance :)

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  4. I like the nectar on her lips lines. Sort of a homage to the gods of love.

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  5. Beautiful and intimate! I love roses and your poem captures their essence! :D

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  6. I swirled with these beautiful words of love...

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  7. How many time can one say 'Beautiful'

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  8. Love the circle approach in you haiku. Wonderful and romantic.

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  9. Wonderful set of haiku for 'rose' ~ I can hear and feel the music of 'love' ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  10. I would love to sing the song of these roses! Lovely cascade!

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  11. Love the progression in this poem, the repeating lines. You just keep getting better and better!

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  12. I loved how you took the last line of each stanza to repeat in the next stanza and how you ended your poem with the same words as the first line...:)

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    1. Well I just tried to use the cascading form ... I am glad you liked it :-)

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  13. Lovely.. could feel the love!

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