Saturday, November 03, 2012

Kiss Me Hard Kiss Me Slow



Kiss me hard,
Kiss me slow,
Drown in this rain,
Dance to the flow.

Touch my heart,
Caress my breath,
Sing a new song,
Of love and faith.

Play with my lips,
Our game of power,
Let go of the umbrella,
Relish this shower.

Time has stopped,
Busy watching this show,
For you my dear,
I rise high, and stoop low.

Kiss me hard,
Kiss me slow,
Drown in this rain,
Dance to the flow.




This Poem is shared with The Mag.







36 comments:

  1. That sound you might be hearing? Me sighing ~~
    loudly ... this is incredibly beautiful!

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  2. A beautiful song of love Green Speck! Love your blogs new look! :-)

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  3. could make for a beautiful song.. I love the flow, the beautiful imagery, every sentiment. It was brilliant Amrit.

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  4. Hard to even think of the rain if sharing passionate kisses :)

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  5. beautiful!

    Loved these lines:

    "Play with my lips,
    Our game of power,
    Let go of the umbrella,
    Relish this shower." :)

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  6. Beautiful..loved the imagery :)
    Add some music to it and it definitely will become an awesome song !

    Take care

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  7. Ohw! This is so romantic! seen other style in your writing today! ;)

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    1. Just tried to write something more than haiku ;-)

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  8. The rain is not really a bother when two hearts are together! Nicely Green!

    Hank

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  9. YOu make kissing in the rain sound both fun and erotic, G.S. I might have liked to have tried that back in my younger days. I did like to RUN in the rain, that was fun. I would imagine myself as being a deer running smoothly down the road.
    ..

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    1. You are never too old to try, Jim ;-)

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  10. this is such a cute piece..beautiful!

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  11. So sensual and tempting.
    Enjoyed it.
    :)

    You write romantic poems and stories very well!

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    1. I try to write everything ... thanks for appreciating :-)

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  12. Sensual, romantic and tempting...loved this poem..simple and appealing!

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  13. This made me want to dance in the rain. Lovely.

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  14. A romantic song... sweet. I think u already have a tune for it ...with your guitar...

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    1. I didn't get the time to make the tune yet, but surely I will :-)

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  15. hi greeny, your poem is soso beautiful, i want to sing her.

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