Monday, July 16, 2012

First - Haiku

                     

First, always special,
Initiates a voyage,
Uncharted province.

Success and triumph,
Forever etched in the heart,
A flurry of dreams.

Moistened lips tremble,
Unleashes first kiss of joy,
Passive river stirs.


This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights and the Prompt is First.







26 comments:

  1. Yes, it's always special to be first :)

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    1. And the first is always special :-)

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  2. Delicious haikus, I like the kisses of joy.

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  3. The first in anything will always remain special. Lovely take on the prompt.

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  4. very beautiful.. unleashes first kiss of joy, passive river stirs... sounds so calming and peaceful. a moment to cherish forever.

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  5. I like the freshness in the brevity of each stanza. Especially the last.

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  6. I like the energy you capture here. Beautiful!

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  7. Very nicely compiled. Each one catches a different, fresh angle on "first".

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  8. You've nicely captured it mate.
    You cant do better than that in a haiku.
    I felt it deeply. every word.

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  9. Who doesn't want to be the first!?

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    1. That's true, but can everyone be first?

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  10. Lovely set...the third one though is very well done. Using the river as a metaphor is effective ~

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  11. Thats super cute...
    First is always special...
    And memorable

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  12. We all remember the feeling you captured so well..

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  13. last haiku is put really well, each word carries off within itself to tell the tale,.

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