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First, always special,
Initiates a voyage,
Uncharted province.
Success and triumph,
Forever etched in the heart,
A flurry of dreams.
Moistened lips tremble,
Unleashes first kiss of joy,
Passive river stirs.
This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights and the Prompt is First.
Yes, it's always special to be first :)
ReplyDeleteAnd the first is always special :-)
DeleteDelicious haikus, I like the kisses of joy.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting Leovi :-)
DeleteThe first in anything will always remain special. Lovely take on the prompt.
ReplyDeletevery beautiful.. unleashes first kiss of joy, passive river stirs... sounds so calming and peaceful. a moment to cherish forever.
ReplyDeleteThank You Crystal :-)
DeleteI like the freshness in the brevity of each stanza. Especially the last.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your warm words :-)
DeleteI like the energy you capture here. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sandy :-)
DeleteVery nicely compiled. Each one catches a different, fresh angle on "first".
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for appreciating :-)
DeleteYou've nicely captured it mate.
ReplyDeleteYou cant do better than that in a haiku.
I felt it deeply. every word.
Thanks a lot Aravind :-)
DeleteWho doesn't want to be the first!?
ReplyDeleteThat's true, but can everyone be first?
DeleteLovely set...the third one though is very well done. Using the river as a metaphor is effective ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
DeleteThats super cute...
ReplyDeleteFirst is always special...
And memorable
Yes... First is first :-)
DeleteWe all remember the feeling you captured so well..
ReplyDeleteIts so common to all of us :-)
Deletelast haiku is put really well, each word carries off within itself to tell the tale,.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jaideep :-)
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