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Flying high,
Flapping its wings,
Violently, passionately,
Soars the kite, up, up, up in the air,
To the ocean of stars,
Fading away in the break of dawn,
Losing itself without a soul to mourn.
The kite gazes down,
Up, right and left,
Not a single feather in sight,
The powerful arch it so possessed,
The pride in its eyes, the blood in its beak,
Perhaps it was time to go down,
The kite had already covered the peak.
Perched on a branch, it noticed the clouds,
Inviting it to the valley of heaven,
Standing on the brink of extinction,
The days of glory lost, the lonesome beast thought,
"Is this my fate, the hunter becomes hunted?"
Tears flowing through its eyes,
But alas, birds don't cry, they are meant to feel the pain,
A dagger suddenly in sight, pierces its heart,
And the last kite falls, beauty lost in dust.
This poem is written for One Single Impression and the Prompt is Kite.
Beautiful! Hx
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ReplyDeleteOops made a mistake ~ reposting ~ Wow! ~ lovely poem ~ a bit sad and photo is awesome thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol :-)
DeletePoignant and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
DeleteVery moving and powerful line...
ReplyDelete"Is this my fate, the hunter becomes hunted?"
Wish and pray this bird never gets extinct!.....Lovely message oriented poem!
This bird is indeed on the verge of extinction, and that's a pity :-(
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ReplyDeleteDid you take any interview of any bird about how they feel? cos it looked so real! You are genius!! Thanks for letting us to read your creations :)
DeleteThanks Dark Angel ... I am not a genius, just a heart felt message to all my fellow humans :-)
DeleteWell imagined and heartbreaking. The fate of powerful yet fragile predators.
ReplyDeleteIts really heartbreaking ... It's time we do something.
DeleteHeartbreaking, this reminder of our capacity for cruelty.
ReplyDeleteThat's true Sandy, we are cruel and selfish, always busy in fidning our own pleasures !!!
Deletebeautiful words and images..!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra :-)
DeleteI agree with everyone else.. everything they said and more! Beautiful imagery, dangerous predators and the extinction of the red kite.. The title, the body of the poem.. it's perfect and just plain beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Crystal :-)
DeleteSo sad...
ReplyDeleteIt indeed is sad !!!
DeleteThere's a difference between natural predators who hunt for survival and those who kill for sport with unfair advantage We have somehow lost our place in the circle of life, with dire consequences to our shared habit. You address this so poignantly. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabrielle !!!
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