Sunday, July 08, 2012

Vital - Haiku


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True motivation,
Vital to a child's progress,
Leads towards right path.

Child grows into man,
With courage and confidence,
Ready for the world.


This haiku is written for Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Vital.




35 comments:

  1. Nice take on the prompt !

    Take Care

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    1. Also your new look is quite refreshing :)

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  2. It's a vital progression in life! True in most instances, Green! Maybe some could not conform and got left by the wayside!

    Hank

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    1. The growth is certainly vital !!! I agree with you completely.

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  3. So very true. motivation is so important for along a path.
    Beautifully said :)

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    1. you have been tagged here in a post on my blog!!
      http://versesfrommyheart.blogspot.in/2012/07/tag-time.html

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    2. Yes I have checked it ... will reply to you over the weekends :-)

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  4. Delightful haiku ~ very realistic messages ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Lovely haiku G.S :) enjoyed them they indeed are true :) amazingly crafted :)

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  6. Beautiful Haiku!! But they're all very beautiful. This is everything a parent could ever ask for! For their children to grow up motivated and well prepared for the world.. the fear of failing them somehow is just unthinkable.. Thanks for posting!!

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  7. Lovely msg buddy! A pat and a push on the back is a must for children! A suggestion if u dont mind.. somethng i got from a fellow Haiku-writer.. Try implying these msgs through words which suggest it, instead of mentioning it directly.. that will bring out the essence of a true Haiku :)
    Soaring tale of glory

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    1. I agree with you Pranita, and will definitely try to implement them in future ... am glad I can learn from such great writers and bloggers over here :-)

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  8. very beautiful....Children do miracles if we give them time and encouragement...

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  9. I agree with DA, its a very very cute Haiku ! Sometimes, I feel that we have lost our innocence and simplicity in todays world and you seem to capture it in your writings-{be it prose or poetry}-in your blog. I like that a lot. Keep it up !

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  10. Nice set, motivation has stayed.
    ..

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  11. Motivational!, and love the blog title header. Keep it up!

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  12. Observation worth following. Excellent set of Haiku.

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  13. Very true and well expressed in your haiku.

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