Beautiful Haiku!! But they're all very beautiful. This is everything a parent could ever ask for! For their children to grow up motivated and well prepared for the world.. the fear of failing them somehow is just unthinkable.. Thanks for posting!!
Lovely msg buddy! A pat and a push on the back is a must for children! A suggestion if u dont mind.. somethng i got from a fellow Haiku-writer.. Try implying these msgs through words which suggest it, instead of mentioning it directly.. that will bring out the essence of a true Haiku :) Soaring tale of glory
I agree with you Pranita, and will definitely try to implement them in future ... am glad I can learn from such great writers and bloggers over here :-)
I agree with DA, its a very very cute Haiku ! Sometimes, I feel that we have lost our innocence and simplicity in todays world and you seem to capture it in your writings-{be it prose or poetry}-in your blog. I like that a lot. Keep it up !
Nice take on the prompt !
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Also your new look is quite refreshing :)
DeleteThanks Fatima :-)
DeleteThats true....
ReplyDeleteIt's a vital progression in life! True in most instances, Green! Maybe some could not conform and got left by the wayside!
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The growth is certainly vital !!! I agree with you completely.
DeleteSo very true. motivation is so important for along a path.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully said :)
you have been tagged here in a post on my blog!!
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Yes I have checked it ... will reply to you over the weekends :-)
DeleteDelightful haiku ~ very realistic messages ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
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DeleteLovely haiku G.S :) enjoyed them they indeed are true :) amazingly crafted :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maharukh :-)
DeleteBeautiful Haiku!! But they're all very beautiful. This is everything a parent could ever ask for! For their children to grow up motivated and well prepared for the world.. the fear of failing them somehow is just unthinkable.. Thanks for posting!!
ReplyDeleteLovely msg buddy! A pat and a push on the back is a must for children! A suggestion if u dont mind.. somethng i got from a fellow Haiku-writer.. Try implying these msgs through words which suggest it, instead of mentioning it directly.. that will bring out the essence of a true Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteSoaring tale of glory
I agree with you Pranita, and will definitely try to implement them in future ... am glad I can learn from such great writers and bloggers over here :-)
Deletevery beautiful....Children do miracles if we give them time and encouragement...
ReplyDeleteAgree :-)
DeleteCute haiku :)
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DeleteI agree with DA, its a very very cute Haiku ! Sometimes, I feel that we have lost our innocence and simplicity in todays world and you seem to capture it in your writings-{be it prose or poetry}-in your blog. I like that a lot. Keep it up !
ReplyDeleteThanks for the encouragement :-)
DeleteNice set, motivation has stayed.
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Thanks Jim :-)
DeleteMotivational!, and love the blog title header. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jaideep :-)
DeleteObservation worth following. Excellent set of Haiku.
ReplyDeleteVery true and well expressed in your haiku.
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