Monday, July 30, 2012

Forget Me Not - Haiku

                                                      (Image Source: http://www.layoutsparks.com)

The new sun rises,
Emanating warm freedom,
Uncovers fresh path.

Valley of hope calls,
Love marks on my naked soul,
Dear, forget-me-not.


This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Forget-me-not.




50 comments:

  1. love marks on my naked soul...wow

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  2. lovely and romantic....after that, she/he won't ever forget you!

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    1. Ha ha ... thanks for the compliment :-)

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  3. love marks on my soul ~ wonderful ~ very romantic ~ senyru ~thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. Your poem gave love a more romantic edge. The second stanza was the soul of the poem. :)

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  5. Immaculate Haiku...:)I loved the second one more...awesome!

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  6. "Dear, forget me not.." Lovely haiku as always.

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  7. These are both lovely senryu and each can stand on its own. Sweet and romantic :)

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  8. Forget me not, indeed. Beautiful and warm.

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  9. This feels warm and filled with morning light. Something is awakening. Beautiful!

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  10. Hi G. Speck ~~ Very nicely written. I love the line, "Love marks on my naked soul." I can see them still though the soul cannot be seen. (Got me to wondering just what kind of marks are they, bites, blood pooling bruises-hickies, scratches that got too carries away, or what--there are others still???)

    Thank you for peeking in on my whimsical lumps of coal senryu. When I lack for time I 'write' things like that, if you can call it writing, just to have some interplay with the other writers.
    ..

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    1. You write amazing, and I love following your blog and reading your works ... thanks for visiting Jim :-)

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  11. written beautifully.. Love reading it! :))

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  12. Perhaps, a lot of romance, but some interpretation as passion as well.. :) Well said.

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  13. I like the idea of there being new paths to follow every day.

    Forget-Me-Nots

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  14. `love marks my naked soul' - true passion in this one. The painting is stunning!

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  15. This speaks of deep feelings. Well done:)

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  16. The warmth of two beings in love would cause freedom of feelings to rise to a higher level. It can never be better, Green!

    Hank

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  17. Lovely, I specially like the second one ~

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