Hi G. Speck ~~ Very nicely written. I love the line, "Love marks on my naked soul." I can see them still though the soul cannot be seen. (Got me to wondering just what kind of marks are they, bites, blood pooling bruises-hickies, scratches that got too carries away, or what--there are others still???)
Thank you for peeking in on my whimsical lumps of coal senryu. When I lack for time I 'write' things like that, if you can call it writing, just to have some interplay with the other writers. ..
love marks on my naked soul...wow
ReplyDeleteAwesome words...!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
Deletelovely and romantic....after that, she/he won't ever forget you!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... thanks for the compliment :-)
Deletelove marks on my soul ~ wonderful ~ very romantic ~ senyru ~thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteYour poem gave love a more romantic edge. The second stanza was the soul of the poem. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Vaishali :-)
DeleteLovely and romantic....
ReplyDeleteImmaculate Haiku...:)I loved the second one more...awesome!
ReplyDelete"Dear, forget me not.." Lovely haiku as always.
ReplyDeleteAww, its too romantic :')
ReplyDeleteForget me not, indeed. Beautiful and warm.
ReplyDeleteThis feels warm and filled with morning light. Something is awakening. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Gabrielle :-)
DeleteHi G. Speck ~~ Very nicely written. I love the line, "Love marks on my naked soul." I can see them still though the soul cannot be seen. (Got me to wondering just what kind of marks are they, bites, blood pooling bruises-hickies, scratches that got too carries away, or what--there are others still???)
ReplyDeleteThank you for peeking in on my whimsical lumps of coal senryu. When I lack for time I 'write' things like that, if you can call it writing, just to have some interplay with the other writers.
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You write amazing, and I love following your blog and reading your works ... thanks for visiting Jim :-)
Deletewritten beautifully.. Love reading it! :))
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Fida :-)
DeleteThank You Loredana :-)
ReplyDeleteQuite an amorous piece!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sui :-)
DeleteLovely words!
ReplyDeleteThank You Valli :-)
Deletebeautiful and romantic :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sohini :-)
DeletePerhaps, a lot of romance, but some interpretation as passion as well.. :) Well said.
ReplyDeleteThank You Leo :-)
DeleteI like the idea of there being new paths to follow every day.
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`love marks my naked soul' - true passion in this one. The painting is stunning!
ReplyDeleteThis speaks of deep feelings. Well done:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tiger :-)
DeleteThe warmth of two beings in love would cause freedom of feelings to rise to a higher level. It can never be better, Green!
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Lovely, I specially like the second one ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
DeleteVery lovely lines;)
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