Twist and turn,
In the grip of passion,
Slither like a snake,
It's love that we make,
Overpowering joy,
Don't be so coy,
Sink in our fate,
You me, together,
Conjoin to be the naughty eight.
Yeah, eight we are,
Joined in fire,
Melting the ice,
The love glows brighter,
Eyes closed shut,
Lips part in pleasure,
Your tongue in mine,
Our worlds now shine,
Promoting to the letter nine.
Yet, eight we will be,
'cause that's what we like best,
Hand in hand,
Caressing warm promises,
Silvery gaze lowers,
Anticipation rising in haste,
Deep dark rose,
Silently whispers,
Carving love prose.
This Poem is written for The Mag.
Such passionate piece, you did it brilliantly, one of the best poem I have read till date! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Dark Angel :-)
DeleteRomantic and passionate ~ May you always be inspired to carve love prose ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace :-)
DeleteWonderfully penned romantic poetry ~thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol :-)
DeleteWINNER! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jessica :-)
DeleteThis is a beautiful rendition of love and its powerful pose. Thank you for sharing such depth and intimacy. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting Archna :-)
DeleteDear Green Speck Scribbler ,
ReplyDeleteWow! for the poetry :) :)
Enjoyed reading your each and every word. Soulful and energetic !
Love the way you ended.
Keep flourishing your creativity.
Thank You Simran ... it's my pleasure you liked it :-)
Deletehi gsp {green speck person} your poem has a cool, sexy vibe.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot ... I am glad you feel so :-)
DeleteBrilliant and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Crystal :-)
DeleteI am with Paige + Shauna... sexy cool vibe... :)
ReplyDeleteIt's an honor, really :-)
DeleteBeautiful....
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja :-)
Delete=)) great piece. didn't know eight could be such romantic (PG version) number. keep writing.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... Thanks Strophicus :-)
DeleteIt had a flow of a song, Amrit... idk why but I want to rate this poem as "Delicious!" :D
ReplyDeleteWow .... that really feels good ... thanks a lot Vaishali :-)
DeleteI love this! Never has eight felt so right ....
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen :-)
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