Thursday, July 26, 2012

Eight

                                                            (Figure Eight, 1952, by Franz Kline)


Twist and turn,
In the grip of passion,
Slither like a snake,
It's love that we make,
Overpowering joy,
Don't be so coy,
Sink in our fate,
You me, together,
Conjoin to be the naughty eight.

Yeah, eight we are,
Joined in fire,
Melting the ice,
The love glows brighter,
Eyes closed shut,
Lips part in pleasure,
Your tongue in mine,
Our worlds now shine,
Promoting to the letter nine.

Yet, eight we will be,
'cause that's what we like best,
Hand in hand,
Caressing warm promises,
Silvery gaze lowers,
Anticipation rising in haste,
Deep dark rose,
Silently whispers,
Carving love prose.



This Poem is written for The Mag.






26 comments:

  1. Such passionate piece, you did it brilliantly, one of the best poem I have read till date! :)

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  2. Romantic and passionate ~ May you always be inspired to carve love prose ~

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  3. Wonderfully penned romantic poetry ~thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

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  4. This is a beautiful rendition of love and its powerful pose. Thank you for sharing such depth and intimacy. :)

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  5. Dear Green Speck Scribbler ,

    Wow! for the poetry :) :)
    Enjoyed reading your each and every word. Soulful and energetic !
    Love the way you ended.

    Keep flourishing your creativity.

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    1. Thank You Simran ... it's my pleasure you liked it :-)

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  6. hi gsp {green speck person} your poem has a cool, sexy vibe.

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    1. Thanks a lot ... I am glad you feel so :-)

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  7. I am with Paige + Shauna... sexy cool vibe... :)

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  8. =)) great piece. didn't know eight could be such romantic (PG version) number. keep writing.

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  9. It had a flow of a song, Amrit... idk why but I want to rate this poem as "Delicious!" :D

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    1. Wow .... that really feels good ... thanks a lot Vaishali :-)

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  10. I love this! Never has eight felt so right ....

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