Sunday, March 27, 2016

Music Of The Cosmos



I have been to the moon
where ducks still quack
the music of the cosmos
adorn my rack
galaxies collide
and stars do crack
this music of the cosmos
our ears now lack

waves meet the skies
and sun runs back
the music of the cosmos
higher up the stack
dreamers will dream
and chasers have the knack
this music of the cosmos
adorn my rack


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19 comments:

  1. Whistles!!! This is absolutely amazing :D might I add that this poem has a powerful rapping quality to it. Beautifully executed. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. "galaxies collide and stars do crack" gives the suggestion of things falling apart....that we can lose those things that were once shimmering and wonderful for us....I like that implication here as it's portrayed beautifully in these words.

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  3. I like the rhyming and the energy in this poem.

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  4. I appreciate the enjoyable rhymes you put into writing here. I agree with Sanaa, your words did sing & rap all together at once. :)

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  5. I too love the rhyme and how it flows....

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  6. This poem certainly has a bouncy rhythm about it, however I now worried about those poor ducks on the moon!

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  7. This poem is really nice to read aloud! Love the rhythm.

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  8. It is good to have a collection that sings in our hearts. Great lines Amrit!


    Hank

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  9. Excellent writing I like rhyming.

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  10. I love that there are ducks on the moon! What a joyous piece

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  11. Your poem sounds like my dreams! What fun!

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  12. We just need to listen better dont we Amrit?
    Hoping you are well.
    Moonie hugs

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  13. love your cosmic poem here. I think the stars and planets are a great theme for art.

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  14. Wow its phenomenal poetry...

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  15. Take me there! :)
    This is a lovely piece of poetry. Bravo.

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  16. Excellent poem here. Your poem sounds like my dreams. Thanks for sharing.

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