Monday, December 14, 2015

A Grain Of Sand




it was dusk
and a grain of sand
that brought us closer
when you touched my hand
your fingers carefully
wiping the sand off my eyes
I wished we were in love
it just felt so nice

our time was up, I'd to leave
adopting a lie I would forever believe


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24 comments:

  1. Aw. Lovely words but kind of a sad story.

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  2. ...can't force love. But it sounds like an awesome friendship. Or at least a wonderful goodbye.

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  3. beautiful flow of the desire! :) keep writing!

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  4. the words soulful, the presentation perfect :)

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  5. I like the way the first verse looks like a grain of sand!

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  6. Wow!! :D I can imagine this clearly. Beautiful.

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  7. Didn't see that coming.. But it was a nice read Amrit.. :)

    Cheers

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