Saturday, May 18, 2013

Accident

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As the little heart pumped inside my soul, I knew things would be all right now, between me and him.

The doctor's voice reverberated against my eardrums, forcing me to smile each and every time I remembered his exact words, "Congratulations, you are expecting."

The doorbell rang and my anticipation touched the skies; he would surely propose marriage once I gave him the news, and then, we would start our own sweet little family, in my valley of dreams.

I hugged him excitedly and whispered "You are going to be Dad, Honey."

He shrugged, freed himself from my embrace, and chuckled, "Don't be crazy darling; this is just a damn accident."


This Five Sentence Micro - Fiction is shared with Five Sentence Fiction - Accident.




26 comments:

  1. Accidents will happen.
    YOU happened!
    Hey...I happened.

    Song:
    We two are among a bunch
    Of accidents...
    SMILES!
    Peace.

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  2. Accident! Could a man be so perverse?

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  3. I think I will dump him like an accident ~ Well written GS ~

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  4. :) well written !!! Super Like !

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  5. Ah, poor girl, I can feel her pain. Well written and heartfelt.

    Barbara@
    allmylivesnow.blogspot.com

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  6. Such things happen quite often these days. Sad though!

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    1. If only people could be more understanding and sensitive to feelings !!!

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  7. I am one ... my brothers are all dark, uni brow and all ... so are my parents ... I am as blond and "uni browless" as they come ... well I'm here ... might just as well continue living, I'd say :)

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    1. Of course, your spirit of life always inspires me to move against all obstacles my friend :-)

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  8. His response says a lot about him and gives her all she needs to move on. A well written piece of a common experience.

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  9. Oh my, that's heartbreaking...

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  10. Ouch! Being so wrapped up in her dreamy world with her baby and be so shunned in every possible respect. I felt that one. Great write!

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