Sunday, September 07, 2014

Start, End



light
for you I yearn
fire
and thus I burn

ashes
narrate a trail so thin
blood
lost dreams shall swim

fake
brightness I chase
truth
deceiving phase

lessons
once taught
ideas
long sought

love
weary ruins shall cry
tears
tired soul now dry

start
the journey once again
end
the fear of approaching pain


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48 comments:

  1. So beautiful. Your writing still has the same interesting factor even better :)

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  2. That first stanza is outstanding!

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  3. Like that moth -- there is a general truth of how we burn in vain.

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  4. So glad I took the time to visit before church. This is very beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

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  5. love this journey, this yearning for light and dispelling fear...

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  6. I specially like the tight opening verses ~ The ending and beginning are twined so close in our journey ~

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  7. "start
    the journey once again
    end
    the fear of approaching pain"

    So beautiful, Amrit! :)

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  8. I too love the beginning and end. Just lovely

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  9. I love the beginning....beautiful

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  10. AH! A Morality Poem.
    Fake brightness, deceiving truth,
    Every day can be a "New Beginning"...
    WELL done, Amrit.

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  11. lost dreams shall swim again
    yes the have to
    how will the tired soul otherwise dry

    Wonderful touched my soul

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  12. A dry gully , Speck , that shall some day flow again ....

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  13. True it is the life of a moth and man. Lovely write.

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  14. Loved this verse
    fake
    brightness I chase
    truth
    deceiving phase

    Nice take on the picture :D

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  15. Alpha and Omega. Nice Mag. Love and Light, S

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  16. Wonderful! I love your opening haiku.

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  17. Greatly weaved +Amrit Sinha....Superb!! and I liked the way the TEXT ARE ALIGNED... :)

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