Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Fence

she guards secrets
deep within her pristine soul
fencing her sorrows



This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem -Fence.





28 comments:

  1. Wonderful response on fence .... very deep thoughts hidden .... almost spiritual.

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  2. Needs a gate, or key,very good

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  3. ah, the secrets we hold....I once heard that your sick as the secrets you keep...not so sure I agree..

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  4. A poignant moment in time when memories are invoked! Nicely GS

    Hank

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  5. But it is said that girls cant hold secrets!!!
    And you shattered that myth...
    Good one!

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  6. We all hide secrets until love allows us to open the hidden doors to our soul. Beautiful write.

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  7. Touching...love this, amrit!

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  8. Good fences make good neighbours/ lovers ...

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  9. Beautifully done Amrit!! A hearty smile and keen ear might just be the key...

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  10. Beautifully share... sad yet beautiful.
    Eliz

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  11. I think I've said this before as well, but I don't vividly recall.. you're a master of haikus! You know how to make beauty with so few words!

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