look
how far
I fly, I sail
oh my reflec-
tion, as we merge
in depths of wavy love
you, and me, one
the glass breaks
binding us
forever
love
love
the solid
ice, will it melt
again, uncertainty creeps
na, it won't, am
sure, but 'm
not
love
I don't
want to fly
but stay grounded
with you, we
framing
love
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Love the waving shape of the poem - like troughs and crests of the wave - highs and lows. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma :-)
DeleteVery nice..:-)
ReplyDeleteWaaaaw...
ReplyDeleteThis is so romantic!
Thank You Satya :-)
DeleteSo beautifully written! The patterns are beautiful too. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the unique style of this one my friend. Looks like reverse-hourglasses :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-)
DeleteBeautiful! I also wanted to write an Etheree, will do it some day! You've done a great job though :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sayantini :-)
DeleteI love the way this poem waves its way down the page, much as the meaning in the poem does.
ReplyDeleteThe shape is gorgeous and poem wow stunning and deep
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
DeleteSweet, heart beats moving into sync.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
DeleteThis had a feel of being at sea, not swept up in the current but effortlessly swimming with the whale sharks, getting the best view of the world from atop and underneath. Loved the form and the flow. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteYou have shaped it so well just like wave of thoughts going up and down!
ReplyDeleteThank You Akila :-)
DeleteWho knows what we might release by melting the ice.....gday
ReplyDeleteWe never know :-)
DeleteAh, this is so nice
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DeleteThanks Ali :-)
ReplyDeleteLove the words and the waves in the structure of the poem :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the water-rhythm of this piece. Also, "love/the solid ice / will it melt" just about melted me. Beautiful. Glad you posted at the Imaginary Garden, or I would not have met your work! Amy
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Amy :-)
DeleteThe shape of the poem is unusual and lovely, it's filled too with wonderful words. Thanks, Amrit. I enjoyed this post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sharon :-)
Deletewell done indeed...thanks for sharing this
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DeleteThanks Jerry :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely words of love.
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Thanks Anna :-)
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