Tuesday, February 04, 2014

Dainichji

I feel his aura
enveloping my emptiness
flying in peace


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Dainichji.



18 comments:

  1. I imagine you could walk or crawl or swim in peace as well. ;)

    Temple of the Winds

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  2. The word "Flying" has always been mesmerizing to me ... the word Peace" will come true in time ... The word "He" makes me shiver and wanting to fly away ...

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  3. One gets the inspiration to be mobile and loving it. Nicely Amrit!

    Hank

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  4. very beautiful...the weightlessness to fly all because of his aura.

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  5. This haiku emanates peace...
    Lovely!

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  6. I dnt know how you guys write a haiku...it is astounding the way you can extract emotions out of barely 10-12 words

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