Sunday, March 02, 2014

A Few Stories You Whisper



a few stories
you whisper
as I close my eyes
in satiated slumber
dipped in honey
kisses and tears
soaked in love
and a tinge of fear

sulking in fables
I dance with my muse
by the open window

and the naughty breeze
so gently
wakes me up

moments of ecstasy
in words they dissolve
secrets long lost
and that's exactly how
poems evolve


This Poem is shared with Magpie Tales - Mag 208.



22 comments:

  1. dancing with the muse when the naughty wind wakes you up...ha...i love that...smiles.

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  2. I specially like this part:

    secrets long lost
    and that's exactly how
    poems evolve

    Good one ~

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  3. Amazing lines~
    moments of ecstasy
    in words they dissolve
    secrets long lost
    and that's exactly how
    poems evolve

    Loved it! :-)

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  4. Each line fills the readers with verve and vigour...the naughty breeze so gently wakes me up...superb!!!

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  5. super.. dats exactly how poems evolve ;)

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  6. You perfectly captured how poems come to the writer's mind here - absolutely fantastic Amrit!

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  7. the mysterious ways of the poet's muse...a very lovely poem, Amrit.

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  8. Wow... This is indeed how poems evolve!

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  9. Hmmm, now I know the secret behind your wonderful creations Amrit :)

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