Saturday, February 08, 2014

Hey Girl, Yes You, The One In Silvery Blue

hey girl
yes you
the one in silvery blue
accelerate my notion
set my world in motion
if you gotta have no aim
your life would be just as maim
look up, the passive smile
gimme your number, and I would dial
you gonna think of me
you gotta dream of we
am no rogue
neither no hog
so hey, don't complain
I stalk you not, am no freaking insane
just say yes for a date tonight
a dinner perhaps, love, and don't fight
a yes will do, just a yes
I will pick you up, no, now don't fuss
goodbye girl, better be ready
I am no gray, neither am shady

yes girl
yes you
the one in silvery blue






21 comments:

  1. This one is just so unlike you yet a great one. I can just rap it :D

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  2. very nicely written, loved it : www.freepaperbook.com

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  3. Yeah! I can hear the nice rap somewhere in the back of my head!!!

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  4. Sounds like someone is smitten with the girl in silvery blue :)

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  5. so lyrical....what a fun piece...i could def hear the music in it...
    ya i think she's caught your eye...smiles.

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  6. Okay. That was it?
    You sound like Honey Singh :P

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    1. Hey... I felt the same too...
      Yo! :P

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    2. I am glad for the comparison :-p

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  7. a delightful poem and flows along like a song. i enjoyed this very much!

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  8. Someone is sounding Yo...
    Nice!

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  9. Interesting piece. Good work with the prompt. :)

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  10. You really do churn out some hummable verses Amrit... The girl in silvery blue will surely grant your request if you sing to her :)

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    1. Ha ha ... let's wait and watch ;-)

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